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Chapter 1 - Hated

A poem I wrote a while ago when I was kinda sad. If you've ever felt unaccepted, you can relate to it.

Chapter 1 - Hated

Chapter 1 - Hated


“Hated”

This is a poem I wrote when I was really down in the dumps.

I'm all alone again

Here by myself, just me

How can I deserve this?

Oh, how can this be?

Everyone hates me, I don't know why

I can't stand to feel like this!

I'm just gonna break down and cry.



There's no reason for anyone to hate me

Well, except for one thing

I'm so different from everyone

I never have really fit in

But that's no reason for hate!

Cause no one is the same

But I'm so different from everyone

To them it's not okay.



Why can't they just accept me

For who I am?

And why can't they see

This is just the way I am?

I'm not bad, I've never been mean

Kind and shy, you see

Quite the contrary



But no one knows the loneliness inside me

No one can see the pain within me

I guess that no one will ever understand me.



I just realized that this poem kinda describes Naruto. Cuz, ya know, he's so lonely and everyone hates him. Well, not everyone, but most people. Of course, I wrote this months before it ever aired…

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whisper on June 13, 2006, 3:07:31 AM

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whisperthis so describes me
i hated my high school years bcuz everyone made fun of me since i was a "freak" as they call me :(
we all need hugs
faves

RavenGothGirl on January 2, 2006, 8:35:56 PM

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RavenGothGirlYeah...this comment does not describe me at all in any way! What...oh no! No!! I'm not suicidal!!! Please don't take me to the padded room again!!!!
Kidding! This poem kinda describes me too...kay, it describes me a LOT. I'm like the ultimate freak in my school, I have one really awesome group of friends and everyone else makes fun of me. You can see the shout outs to my friends in my profile lolz
I'll look at that comment now!

cutiealue13 on December 24, 2005, 10:47:58 AM

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cutiealue13this pome is almost exactly all about me! in school i am the ultamit shy person, no one talks to (well only when there making fun of me) im always called stink bomb, cacourouch, and all these other names. im used to it now it doesnt bother me but still i wished they stop. but one person noticed me...(look at the comment on ur pome called shy)

RavenGothGirl on December 8, 2005, 11:30:31 PM

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RavenGothGirlreally? well thanks for that and thankz for commenting!