Chapter 3 - I saw you Die
Submitted May 20, 2005 Updated June 12, 2005 Status Incomplete | Just a bunch of poems! Most of them arent really good. Read if you want! ^^
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Chapter 3 - I saw you Die
Chapter 3 - I saw you Die
Falling
Without care
Drifting
With no meaning
I am useless
Without you
I have no point to survive
I rather die
Than live without you
Gone
Forever
Theres no way
I can bring you back
I saw you
Die
Now my eyes
Will never be the same
Never
Without care
Drifting
With no meaning
I am useless
Without you
I have no point to survive
I rather die
Than live without you
Gone
Forever
Theres no way
I can bring you back
I saw you
Die
Now my eyes
Will never be the same
Never
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facelift on July 9, 2005, 2:57:07 AM
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this one is really good! i like ur rhyiming skills!TifaBakura on July 3, 2005, 7:06:58 PM
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Ahh sweet *sniffle* Good stuff ^_^CrimsonCherryBlossom on June 17, 2005, 5:48:25 AM
Wow! All of these poems are so great! You are such a talented writer. Your poems are so divine and inspiring! Keep up the terrific work! Buh~Bye ~CrimsonCherryBlossom
sora_RIKU_12 on June 16, 2005, 12:19:37 AM
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that's really sad.......i wan't to cry............adds to favssora_RIKU_12 on June 16, 2005, 12:19:14 AM
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that's really sad.......i wan't to cry............adds to favsmustanggirl on June 12, 2005, 10:05:47 AM
mustanggirl on
AWW!!! OMG!! THATS SO SAD!!!! YET IT'S SUCH A GREAT POEM!!!!! I LUV IT!!!~Inu-Chan