Chapter 1 - Black Is My Sky
Submitted December 18, 2006 Updated December 18, 2006 Status Complete | Well, this 1 poem meant alot when i read it 4 the first time after i wrote it. I'm not sure if it'll have the same effect on u but this seems that it means alot 4 people 2 understand in life. I WANT 2 KNOW WAT U THINK THIS MEANS 2 U.
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Chapter 1 - Black Is My Sky
Chapter 1 - Black Is My Sky
Black is my sky,
torn is my heart,
hurt is my love,
and dieing is me.
Tears fall down my face.
Hope is knowing,
that you have faith,
but then finding
that you've been replaced.
Faith is knowing that you care
but then somethings happens
and it all will disappear.
And knowing is thinking that you are right,
but then you see that you've lost the fight.
Right is having you seem to have it all,
but in the end it's wrong and will fall.
Wrongs is writing that you know the rest
and then having thought that it is he has the best.
Fall is just falling flat on your face
because loving was just in the wrong place.
And places are places that's all you can find,
and there the sun will just never shine.
So
you will find hope,
and you will find faith,
and you will be knowing that you're right.
Wrong will you be to stop at a place.
And then you'll see that you are blind
and all the things I said were true.
Black is my sky,
torn is my heart,
hurt is my love,
and dieing is me.
Tears fall down my face.
Let us all have the space for-
the darkness
to embrace.....
and the light to disappear,
as if the end was near.
torn is my heart,
hurt is my love,
and dieing is me.
Tears fall down my face.
Hope is knowing,
that you have faith,
but then finding
that you've been replaced.
Faith is knowing that you care
but then somethings happens
and it all will disappear.
And knowing is thinking that you are right,
but then you see that you've lost the fight.
Right is having you seem to have it all,
but in the end it's wrong and will fall.
Wrongs is writing that you know the rest
and then having thought that it is he has the best.
Fall is just falling flat on your face
because loving was just in the wrong place.
And places are places that's all you can find,
and there the sun will just never shine.
So
you will find hope,
and you will find faith,
and you will be knowing that you're right.
Wrong will you be to stop at a place.
And then you'll see that you are blind
and all the things I said were true.
Black is my sky,
torn is my heart,
hurt is my love,
and dieing is me.
Tears fall down my face.
Let us all have the space for-
the darkness
to embrace.....
and the light to disappear,
as if the end was near.
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alex772 on June 3, 2007, 7:15:21 AM
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i like it sounds how i act some times*smiles real big*SasukesChick on June 3, 2007, 7:27:11 AM
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.......okalex772 on June 3, 2007, 9:00:44 AM
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srySasukesChick on June 4, 2007, 9:28:51 AM
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No, no. Don't be sorry. I'm glad you like it, thank you.nejislover123 on December 25, 2006, 4:56:14 AM
wow geez so depresing...I LIKE IT ur awesome at writing poems u shoulnt wait to be a famous athor WRITE A BOOK XD XD XD X3 ^_^ - so many smileyssmarty2456 on December 20, 2006, 11:02:13 AM
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WHOA! That's deep, so many meanings, not sure what to say.SasukesChick on December 20, 2006, 9:58:43 PM
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huh, wen i finished typing it i was suprised in wat i said. i just really wanted 2 know wat other felt 2 know all this. i mean, i felt like sum of this was true. i just wasn't sure.