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Chapter 1 - "The Face in the Mirror"

This is a poem I entered into the "Principal's Writing Contest" at my school. It ended up winning an award in poetry. It's called "The Face in the Mirror"

Chapter 1 - "The Face in the Mirror"

Chapter 1 - "The Face in the Mirror"
This also was done for a school project, but then revised to what it is now. Please enjoy!

"The Face in the Mirror"

When I look in the mirror,
I see a girl,
She is me.

She belongs here and knows it,
But doesn't know how it would have been somewhere esle,
She is me.

She is a person who is loyal and trusting,
And doesn't understand people who abuse her qualities,
She is me.

Her soul is scarred like manatee flesh by careless others,
These scars create a cage around her;
She is trapped by her shyness,
She is me.

The cage synthesizes of invisible fears, unknown to others,
But the bars of a cage cannot trap light radiating from her heart,
Sections of the cage break away each day she faces her fears,
She is me.

From the voids flow creativity,
Shedding light through her hands and escaping every time she smiles,
She is me.

Her friends shed light to her heart and refuel the light,
The light between the friends grows stronger,
Helping her heart grow larger,
Until she can be completely released,
She is me.

Brittany White

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Riotgrl340 on June 14, 2005, 1:21:32 AM

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Riotgrl340this is awesome

little_Light_Dark_Artist on April 2, 2005, 10:14:14 AM

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little_Light_Dark_Artistmadd sick pure genius ,that sooty persons right why havent ppl comented
o well no wonder u won that contest id b pissed if u lost u r frickin amazing,sick *favs*

sooty on August 23, 2004, 4:06:45 PM

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sootyI dont know why people havent commented! Me really like dis, no wonder u won an award!!!!! (ADDS TO FAVS!)