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Soothing Storm

In an old, banished house, two girl watch a storm, and begen to see thing that were right under their noses the whole time...



Chapter 1 - Soothing Storm
Submitted: June 16, 2005 • Updated: June 16, 2005
Word count: 1502 • Size: 8k • Comments: 6 • views: 211


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yaoi_is_my_life on September 3, 2006, 12:11:32 PM

yaoi_is_my_life on (Chapter: 1)
yaoi_is_my_lifewow i love it right more please

scooter_girl_Haruko on July 16, 2006, 9:41:44 AM

scooter_girl_Haruko on (Chapter: 1)
scooter_girl_Harukocant wait to read more!

dramaqueen101 on December 12, 2005, 10:51:39 AM

dramaqueen101 on (Chapter: 1)
dramaqueen101I love this fic. I like how dark it is, but how the hope lives on somehow...
*walks away lost in thought*

zakuman on July 27, 2005, 5:57:56 AM

zakuman on (Chapter: 1)
zakumanIt's got the emotions. You've conveyed the imagery pretty well. I had a few difficulties understanding some sentences. But over all, I liked it. You do really think about the girls caring for each other. And there's no dirty business. But that doesn't really matter. I'll be interested to see what happens between them next though. So far so good. Just a little fine tuning on a few of the words and it'd be perfect.

Bleak on July 21, 2005, 3:13:40 PM

Bleak on (Chapter: 1)
BleakBeautiful work, I really love it. ^^

Black_Rose13531 on July 19, 2005, 4:58:11 PM

Black_Rose13531 on (Chapter: 1)
Black_Rose13531*first comment dance* Yay! Anyway...this is a beatiful story! I loved it! You should really continue...I can't wait to read more!