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Chapter 1 - They aren't there...

my first poem on FAC and it sorta sad... its about a girl who likes a guy and the guy does but he doesn't wanna let it show... it drives them both to suicide... dun really know wat made me write this...

Chapter 1 - They aren't there...

Chapter 1 - They aren't there...
They Aren''t There... Anymore
 
 
There once was a guy
that she had to forget
His friends, they had made her cry
Oh, they were such a threat
 
They had driven her to the edge
They had made her depressed
Though she was dying deep inside
She tried to act her very best
 
She wanted to commit suicide
Why go on living her life?
He just ignored her every day
She no longer wanted to be alive
 
His friends had played a cruel trick
She couldn''t see the light
So sadly she believed them
Her heart felt like a kite
 
So she went up to him and told him
Told him that she loved him
All he did was stare and told her that he didn''t
Oh, did her soul dim
 
She ran home and cried
For she had a broken heart
She was mad that she believed them
They had took her heart and tore it apart
 
So she ran to the kitchen
and pulled out the sharpest knife
She had slit her wrists
And screamed she wanted to die
 
So he had came to her funeral
Oh, look at her now
He took this harder that anyone else
Oh, why did she die and how?
 
The night after her funeral
He cried in despair
He screamed and screamed
That he really did care
 
He never thought that it was this hard
That he couldn''t be
be without her
He was only left with the memory
 
He wanted to die
He couldn''t take it anymore
He wanted to commit suicide
He wanted to know what she died for
 
He saw something sharp
out of the corner of his eye
so he went and grabbed it
and yelled he wanted to die
 
So he cut his wrists
and watched the blood pour out
He collapsed and fell to the floor
His mind became clout
 
They are both dead now
They are buried side by side
And every one now mourns
Why did they commit suicide?
 

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crazy_jamaican_gurl on October 9, 2006, 6:33:23 AM

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crazy_jamaican_gurlThis is sad but also well written. I think it is good but then again I am kinda screwed up in the head...anyway good job.

Vampiress_Kurama on June 22, 2006, 11:13:10 AM

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Vampiress_Kurama...Remind me why I'm the only person to Comment on this? This is sad! and I love it... because Im disturbed and like the morbid. This is awesome. -favs-