Chapter 1 - Lonley Heart
Submitted June 29, 2004 Updated June 29, 2004 Status Incomplete | my first poem....damn i wanna kill it........gotta thank Melissa Martin tho 4 gettin me started in writeing poems. she let me use the beginning of hers and i was jsut gonna mess around but now ive gone almost pro! go look at "innoccence" !! it prove
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Chapter 1 - Lonley Heart
Chapter 1 - Lonley Heart
Sometimes I go into cupids spell,
even though I dont realize it,
but it can change my life forever,
it can make me think I'm stupid
and while I am in cupids spell,
it can make me feel like I'm in love,
then love gives a great big shove,
I cry my tears then you see,
what you really ment to me
I see the past, there is no future,
And I feel like I'm going to keep falling,
as the tears keep bawling,
I feel like I've known you in the past,
where are you? You're wearing a mask
This life kills all who stands up,
Makes the toughest male look like a pup,
And yet you manged to pass,
But when your back was turned,
it took you out with one final slash,
I worried and I cared,
I was soaked but i was there,
and what did you do?
You hurt me and my family
Now its time, to say goodbye...
I'll see you next time.......
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even though I dont realize it,
but it can change my life forever,
it can make me think I'm stupid
and while I am in cupids spell,
it can make me feel like I'm in love,
then love gives a great big shove,
I cry my tears then you see,
what you really ment to me
I see the past, there is no future,
And I feel like I'm going to keep falling,
as the tears keep bawling,
I feel like I've known you in the past,
where are you? You're wearing a mask
This life kills all who stands up,
Makes the toughest male look like a pup,
And yet you manged to pass,
But when your back was turned,
it took you out with one final slash,
I worried and I cared,
I was soaked but i was there,
and what did you do?
You hurt me and my family
Now its time, to say goodbye...
I'll see you next time.......
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