Chapter 1 - Stop Breathing
Submitted July 20, 2006 Updated July 20, 2006 Status Complete | teehee, forgot somethin. sorry!
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Chapter 1 - Stop Breathing
Chapter 1 - Stop Breathing
Stop Breathing
Drip drop go my tears on the window sil
in time to the pouring rain
that is still
beating on the outside window pane
ice charges through my veins
to my heart and back again
until all ifeel is pain
and as my eyes begin to fade to gray
i know that it is my last day,
and as my skin goes chalky and pale
each breath i take is raspy and stail
the blood freezes beneath my skin
and now i know that life''s a sin,
lay to rest my soul
my heart stops beating
and make me whole
as i stop breathing.
i changed it a little. whaddaya think? tellme tellme telleme!!!!!!!
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moonatnoon28 on August 4, 2006, 8:54:32 AM
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pretty good. puncuation would make just amazing, though!
KM on July 26, 2006, 1:54:55 PM
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