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Chapter 1 - Stop Breathing

teehee, forgot somethin. sorry!

Chapter 1 - Stop Breathing

Chapter 1 - Stop Breathing

Stop Breathing

Drip drop go my tears on the window sil

in time to the pouring rain

that is still

beating on the outside window pane

ice charges through my veins

to my heart and back again

until all ifeel is pain

and as my eyes begin to fade to gray

i know that it is my last day,

and as my skin goes chalky and pale

each breath i take is raspy and stail

the blood freezes beneath my skin

and now i know that life''s a sin,

lay to rest my soul

my heart stops beating

 and make me whole

as i stop breathing.

 

i changed it a little. whaddaya think? tellme tellme telleme!!!!!!!

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moonatnoon28 on August 4, 2006, 8:54:32 AM

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moonatnoon28pretty good. puncuation would make just amazing, though!

KM on July 26, 2006, 1:54:55 PM

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KMAmazing!