Chapter 1 - My Garden of Eden
Submitted June 20, 2004 Updated June 20, 2004 Status Incomplete | My version of the Garden of Eden
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Chapter 1 - My Garden of Eden
Chapter 1 - My Garden of Eden
- Based upon the Garden of Eden. It's free for anybody to interpret, it probably means different things for different people but for me it kind of symbolizes the evil inside everybody, after all we are all capable of doing bad things…-
[My Garden of Eden] ©
In the hands of God, a holy place
Lies my garden, a forest of grace
The beauty flows and peace is free
Towards the centre juts out a tree
Trunk twisted, snake entwined
Apples violent red, bloody lined
I take a bite and my garden shatters
Destroying all the good that matters
And the flowers in my Garden of Eden
The weeds strangle and bleed them
Until the flowers choke and cry
Falling for evil they go limp and die
This is the end for my garden
The end of innocence for the world of men
And as the weeds of evil grow
The gates of my Eden open and I know
That the sins of all my forgotten past
The ones of which I hoped wouldn't last
Are going to come back to haunt me
And it'll show for you to see
I've bitten into the apple and its rotting me inside
Today's the day humanity lived and died
And when I wake up in the morning
And hear my nightmares calling
It seems like I been asleep for so long
A thousand years have been and gone
Yet my Garden of Eden has overgrown
Although I'm pretending all along I've known
The flowers scream out, choke and cry
And all my sanity will sicken and die
Whispering willows weep to me
Let it spread and leave them be
But my evil has been let loose
Knotted by my hangman's noose
And in my Garden of Eden, I see
Evil spreading across the land and sea
And I know I've unleashed a monster
One of which there is only one cure
The goodness of man's heart
Most of which wouldn't part
Now humanity, steal, abuse and kill
I can stop it but I'm already dancing with the devil
-Comments and criticism is welcomed as well as personal opinions.-
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Anime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:28:01 AM
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