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Chapter 1 - Mirror Me

Is it true that you're reflection reveals your soul? This poem is about what my reflection shows me.

Chapter 1 - Mirror Me

Chapter 1 - Mirror Me


-The reason why vampires have no reflection is due to the idea that dates back hundreds of years that when you look into a mirror your reflection is your soul, I used this idea to compare the two lives I seemed to live. One was the `show' life where everything I did was a lie and I seemed happy, the other know as `Mirror Me' was my true inner self the one who had to deal with all the pain.-



[MIRROR ME] ©

Look in the mirror so as I can see

But who is this girl staring back at me?

Her eyes are wet, drawn back pained.

Lips set tight. Face tear stained.

Who is this girl, who can she be?

Fragile and lonely it can't be me

Teardrops shed we look the same

But inside she can't feel what I call pain

Bound by sadness brings out the sorrow

Wipe those tears there'll be a tomorrow

Or will there? I can't be sure

No longer am I me, not anymore

Emotion that I dare not let show

Happiness forever touch and go

Bringing out my deepest insecurities

Bound by the mirror so no one sees

I can't let the world know

That I'm beginning to show

Seeing if I care my mirror tears don't lie

But no one gets to see me, when I cry

As a tear falls I realize in vain

That mirror me has begun to share our pain



-Comments and criticism is welcomed as well as personal opinions.-

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Anime-Chick on October 4, 2004, 12:26:28 AM

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Anime-Chicki understand you...

Roxy_the_Wolf_demon on August 16, 2004, 7:55:34 AM

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Roxy_the_Wolf_demonWow. This is a beautiful poem, I commented on this on because I read your others and they are all just as beautiful. -claps- Very good. I also how you involed the vampire seniaro. Bravo!