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Chapter 1 - Untitled

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Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


She would sit on her windowsill

Watching the sky pass by

She sits there everyday and just cries

She misses everyone she once loved

But now she's no one and lives unloved

The memories just flow and flow

Never to cease, never to go

She cries and cries to find a way home

Just to figure out that she's all alone

Everyone had forgotten who she was

She vanished away and lost all their love

Her tower is burning and she's at the top

She sits up there to hide all her hateful thoughts

The sky is all that comforts her, but it only stares

It doesn't talk to her just as long as she has something to comfort her, then she doesn't care

She sits up there abandoned crying herself to sleep

Dreams of death as the shadows start to creep

The wind wakes her and whistles its lullaby

Making her yearn more for her sweet suicide

Though she'll fall into fire, the evil light place

Where she'll stare at him face to face

So she's trying to be good trying to be happy

But it only makes her more unhappy

She wont stop crying the pain wont let her

And soon one day the knife will over take her


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royally_spooky on April 9, 2006, 6:31:55 PM

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royally_spookyThat was really kool but sad also. Nice job.

weewoo on January 15, 2006, 1:26:16 PM

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weewoothars cool! really liked it

YukinaObbsessionist on December 25, 2005, 11:00:01 AM

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YukinaObbsessionist*story and author to favez* This is amazing, I got chills from reading it. You really havfta make more, because I feel you are a talented poet. A bit dark perhaps, but between us, DARK RULES! ~_^! Keep up the awesome work! *Tacklez/Hugglez* ~~~~~LUVZ~~~~~ P.S. Your screen name is fantastic!

aLrEaDy_DeAd on December 22, 2005, 10:51:05 AM

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aLrEaDy_DeAdthis is a kick @$$ poem its sad yet has a hint of mystery as for who the person is i cant wait to here your next poem!:P

restless_dreamer on December 2, 2005, 2:39:29 PM

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restless_dreamerWow you are an amazing poet! Excellent work!

Ichidou_Daisuke on November 18, 2005, 10:21:15 AM

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Ichidou_DaisukeMan, you're such an awesome poet. I especially like this piece. I dunno... maybe all the hidden analogies is why. ^^