Chapter 1 - Sadness
Submitted April 9, 2007 Updated April 5, 2009 Status Incomplete | Any one who has ever felt like they've been locking some feeling of sadness.This poem will show that their not alone.
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Chapter 1 - Sadness
Chapter 1 - Sadness
Sadness
By: Symphoniaprincess101
Sadness is nothing more than a felling,
We can or cannot keep it locked up.
Some have trouble dealing with it.
Some do not.
As life goes on,
Sadness keeps on building.
Some feel its best to keep it locked away.
While others burst it out to those they can trust.
No one can save you from this heart burn.
Some try and forget about it and try to move on but,
Nothing can help them escape from its grasp.
As many more people suffer,
Their friends and families suffer with them somehow.
Sadness is nothing but a type of pain,
That takes time to cure.
This pain can be caused by,
A pet or family member dying.
Also by someone you like tells you to your face that,
They think of you as a friend only.
These pains can go away.
But not the ones about a family member or pets.
Sadness can hurt forever.
Even after death you part from this world.
But if you express your feelings,
With friends, family, and even teachers,
Sadness will become nothing more than a memory.
Believe me,
I can relate.
By: Symphoniaprincess101
Sadness is nothing more than a felling,
We can or cannot keep it locked up.
Some have trouble dealing with it.
Some do not.
As life goes on,
Sadness keeps on building.
Some feel its best to keep it locked away.
While others burst it out to those they can trust.
No one can save you from this heart burn.
Some try and forget about it and try to move on but,
Nothing can help them escape from its grasp.
As many more people suffer,
Their friends and families suffer with them somehow.
Sadness is nothing but a type of pain,
That takes time to cure.
This pain can be caused by,
A pet or family member dying.
Also by someone you like tells you to your face that,
They think of you as a friend only.
These pains can go away.
But not the ones about a family member or pets.
Sadness can hurt forever.
Even after death you part from this world.
But if you express your feelings,
With friends, family, and even teachers,
Sadness will become nothing more than a memory.
Believe me,
I can relate.
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Starofwonder123 on November 20, 2007, 8:17:05 AM
That...that touched me...right in the heart...Symphoniaprincess101 on November 20, 2007, 9:29:09 AM
that's how i feel when i'm not on the computer talking to my friends and online family.winxgirl21 on July 31, 2007, 10:33:39 AM
winxgirl21 on
That is so totally true! The poem was beautiful ^-^Symphoniaprincess101 on August 1, 2007, 7:16:43 AM
Thanks^^Littletwo35 on July 31, 2007, 10:13:08 AM
Littletwo35 on
awwwww cuteSymphoniaprincess101 on July 31, 2007, 10:20:07 AM
thanks^^gaaralover12 on May 17, 2007, 10:07:39 AM
gaaralover12 on
Very good! ^^I can't write poems worth the crap..
Symphoniaprincess101 on May 26, 2007, 10:14:57 AM
it took me 5 days just to come up with that.Kouni46892742 on April 20, 2007, 8:15:42 AM
Awwww....such a sad poem...i can relate to that very wellSymphoniaprincess101 on May 17, 2007, 9:55:03 AM
how?Kouni46892742 on May 17, 2007, 10:53:45 AM
A lot of my family members and pets have died, and i know that talking to others makes it a lot betterSymphoniaprincess101 on May 26, 2007, 10:14:14 AM
just like me.marisa937 on April 9, 2007, 12:02:49 PM
marisa937 on
cool!^^it's really good!^^
kind or remind's me of leo!^^(OC)
Leo:...?
anyway's good poem!^^
Symphoniaprincess101 on April 9, 2007, 12:05:53 PM
Thanks!!