Chapter 23 - a fake!?
Submitted August 5, 2007 Updated July 13, 2008 Status Complete | This is my ORIGINAL story everything is © TKxKari224 except for kaoru, kaoru is © xEmotional and also hikagu is © NAERA (xEmotional helped me with some of the parts ^^)Claire is © NAERA
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Chapter 23 - a fake!?
Chapter 23 - a fake!?
"hmm..this..will be one interesting battle.." said the mysterious person
"this.." said jin "is the fight for out lives!"
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"guys we have to be serious now!" said hikaga
everyone stared at him and said "we know"
they all got into their fighting positions, "lets go!!" yelled jin
"kyaa~" said kotoko "this is for everything!"
"yes!" said claire and sanome
kaoru was all ready so was keichi, claire, jin, sanome, kotoko, hikaga, and
arina was half ready.
"you cant possibly think you can win" said the mysterious man
"heh" said kaoru
"obviously you dont know kaoru!" yelled arina "he's the best of us all!"
"ARINA!" they all yelled "your not suppose to tell him that!"
"oh no!" said sanome
the mysterious man who totally needs a name smiled..lets name him ponocho..
but he hates that name so he renamed himself Xel
.... anyway back to the story:
"now," said xel "is the end"
"not if we can help it!" said keichi and hikaga
"Baka man!" said kotoko
"what, you think you can kill me with insults. stop stalling and show me what
you idiot kids are made of!" xel yelled
"paahh" said sanome "what if we dont want to"
"then i'll just have to show you what i have" said xel
"waa!" said arina as she hid behind kaoru
Kaoru looked annoyed at the moment then smirked "okay.." he said
they all looked at him.
"guys...lets show..him.." said kaoru
They all looked suprised, but agree'd none the less.
but kaoru knew..thats why he said they would show him. *but know what? ill tell
you later*
sanome ran over to kaoru and asked
"whats up?" sanome asked "are we just gonna fight him like this?"
kaoru whispered something in her ear and sanome gasped.
"reallly!" she yelled causing everyone to look at her.
"ah! sorry sorry" she said then ran back
Xel was getting impatient and angry "llisten up your going to die now whether
you like it or not!"
he came down charging at the person in the very front which was...JIN!! :O
Jin got his wand ready to attack.
but just then kaoru swooshed in and said something then zapped him with
something.
the Xel came and froze turned to ash then dissapeared.
"it wasnt the real Xel" said sanome "kaoru knew"
"wow" said hikaga" way to go bud" he said as he slapped kaoru's back
kaoru gave a little cough and said:
"its not over..."
"wadda ya mean" said hikaga
"there's the real one left..." kaoru said
"oh my gosh!" kotoko yelled " thats right..what do we do! claire?"
"how should i know im as confused as anyone else" claire said
just then there was a large bang everyone turned around to see smoke
surrounding somone in it.
"eh?" said claire
"who is it?" kotoko asked
"i dont know" keichi replied.
then the figure who was becoming obvious it was a guy came closer and closer
until.....
"AHHHHHHHHHH!" sanome yelled "ITS-"
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omg u dont get to know xD dont worry u'll find out next ch. ^^
"this.." said jin "is the fight for out lives!"
--------------------------------------------------------
"guys we have to be serious now!" said hikaga
everyone stared at him and said "we know"
they all got into their fighting positions, "lets go!!" yelled jin
"kyaa~" said kotoko "this is for everything!"
"yes!" said claire and sanome
kaoru was all ready so was keichi, claire, jin, sanome, kotoko, hikaga, and
arina was half ready.
"you cant possibly think you can win" said the mysterious man
"heh" said kaoru
"obviously you dont know kaoru!" yelled arina "he's the best of us all!"
"ARINA!" they all yelled "your not suppose to tell him that!"
"oh no!" said sanome
the mysterious man who totally needs a name smiled..lets name him ponocho..
but he hates that name so he renamed himself Xel
.... anyway back to the story:
"now," said xel "is the end"
"not if we can help it!" said keichi and hikaga
"Baka man!" said kotoko
"what, you think you can kill me with insults. stop stalling and show me what
you idiot kids are made of!" xel yelled
"paahh" said sanome "what if we dont want to"
"then i'll just have to show you what i have" said xel
"waa!" said arina as she hid behind kaoru
Kaoru looked annoyed at the moment then smirked "okay.." he said
they all looked at him.
"guys...lets show..him.." said kaoru
They all looked suprised, but agree'd none the less.
but kaoru knew..thats why he said they would show him. *but know what? ill tell
you later*
sanome ran over to kaoru and asked
"whats up?" sanome asked "are we just gonna fight him like this?"
kaoru whispered something in her ear and sanome gasped.
"reallly!" she yelled causing everyone to look at her.
"ah! sorry sorry" she said then ran back
Xel was getting impatient and angry "llisten up your going to die now whether
you like it or not!"
he came down charging at the person in the very front which was...JIN!! :O
Jin got his wand ready to attack.
but just then kaoru swooshed in and said something then zapped him with
something.
the Xel came and froze turned to ash then dissapeared.
"it wasnt the real Xel" said sanome "kaoru knew"
"wow" said hikaga" way to go bud" he said as he slapped kaoru's back
kaoru gave a little cough and said:
"its not over..."
"wadda ya mean" said hikaga
"there's the real one left..." kaoru said
"oh my gosh!" kotoko yelled " thats right..what do we do! claire?"
"how should i know im as confused as anyone else" claire said
just then there was a large bang everyone turned around to see smoke
surrounding somone in it.
"eh?" said claire
"who is it?" kotoko asked
"i dont know" keichi replied.
then the figure who was becoming obvious it was a guy came closer and closer
until.....
"AHHHHHHHHHH!" sanome yelled "ITS-"
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omg u dont get to know xD dont worry u'll find out next ch. ^^
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NAERA on September 14, 2007, 6:21:21 AM
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TKxKari224 on September 16, 2007, 4:51:27 AM
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lolxEmotional on September 14, 2007, 5:51:31 AM
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it's .. XEL . lolol rofl omg lol ahaha lmao ahaha lol omg rofl .just kiddin' .