Rise of The Dead Loc

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Author
Tane
Tane

Submitted
August 31, 2006
Updated
August 31, 2006
Status
Complete

Chapters: 1
Size: 7k
Words: 1,397
Comments: 2
Views: 541
Faves...: 0
Rating: 0

My first chapter of the book I'm actually into. Ually I dont finish a story, but this time Ive already planned whats going to happen. Any Problems, just tell me because I have to know so I can fix them. Thanks Dudes and Dudetts!

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - Captain John Pike
Submitted: August 31, 2006 • Updated: August 31, 2006
Word count: 1397 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 158

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brinabunny on February 8, 2007, 8:33:09 AM

brinabunny on February 8, 2007, 8:33:09 AM (Chapter: 1)

It's good. Has good detail and is interesting. Keep up the good work. You seem to put thought into it so that makes it even better.

Tane on January 5, 2007, 12:05:12 PM

Tane on January 5, 2007, 12:05:12 PM (Chapter: 1)

Cmon peeps! Write a friken commet! btw, this is my rough draft now. I'm rewriting everything cause i just gots some more writing skills!