Chapter 1 - last wish
Submitted August 1, 2007 Updated August 10, 2007 Status Complete | i just wanted to write something down .i like how it came out.
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Chapter 1 - last wish
Chapter 1 - last wish
my futer is not where my dreams are...
and i will smile through all my pain..
dont forget..ur not alone...
say thank you...
never tell friends good bye...
hold them close while you can...
tell them u love them before its to late...
forgive and forget...
beleive in them even if u dont believe in urself..
cry your tears...dont hold them in
live life without regrets...
scream as load as you can...
dance in the rain...
sing like no one is watching...
love for who they are...not what u want them to be...
dream...and beleive...
find something in life to protect...
keep friends close to you...
dont go through life alone...
1 single thing should not stop you from living...
so i say...before i go...please...just say you love me.
and i will smile through all my pain..
dont forget..ur not alone...
say thank you...
never tell friends good bye...
hold them close while you can...
tell them u love them before its to late...
forgive and forget...
beleive in them even if u dont believe in urself..
cry your tears...dont hold them in
live life without regrets...
scream as load as you can...
dance in the rain...
sing like no one is watching...
love for who they are...not what u want them to be...
dream...and beleive...
find something in life to protect...
keep friends close to you...
dont go through life alone...
1 single thing should not stop you from living...
so i say...before i go...please...just say you love me.
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Symphoniaprincess101 on August 21, 2007, 6:10:28 AM
this reminds me of my poem "Symphoniaprincess101's Deepest Feelings"it was just beuatiful^^Sasukegurl4life on August 5, 2007, 2:36:10 PM
................alchemest1 on August 1, 2007, 2:04:30 PM
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Wow! That was amazing! Where did you get the idea for that?! With a bit of polishing you will be a great writer. I loved it HONEST!TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 9:56:39 AM
i dont really kno where i got the idea from i just kinda...wrote something down and it came out like thatalchemest1 on August 3, 2007, 3:52:10 PM
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Wow! That is a pretty cool set of verses for pulling them out of thin air. You really are talented! LOVE IT! ADDED TO FAVES.TheBestDamnThing on August 5, 2007, 1:18:34 PM
wow thanksTheBestDamnThing on August 2, 2007, 1:55:28 AM
thank u so much for the comment...much apreciated!Animegurl4life on August 1, 2007, 1:14:24 PM
... omg ... i'm moved, shelby. i'm really moved. it's just... beautiful.TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 1:50:07 PM
lolz thanks *hugs*jeffhardy2345 on August 1, 2007, 11:20:32 AM
Shelby? That is wounderful! I could never write that!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 11:28:17 AM
thank u!boredom strikes ideaswinxgirl21 on August 1, 2007, 6:47:41 AM
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That's beautiful! And I'm not just saying that to be nice (trust me, I know that you want your writing critiqued ^-^) It's so true, and the way you phrased it is beautiful! With some more pactice, you'll be great at writing!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 10:04:07 AM
thank u so much for the enthusiasm.its funny what u can do when ur bored!lOlzwinxgirl21 on August 1, 2007, 10:23:13 AM
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yea, it is ^-^ That's actually when I get my best ideas for my stories!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 10:32:16 AM
lolz ^_^TheBestDamnThing on August 3, 2007, 7:47:27 AM
yes it is, meg,yes it isgaaragurl4life on August 1, 2007, 4:20:20 AM
that good shelby u can b deep when u want to beTheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 5:30:50 AM
Ya when i want to b!!!!TheBestDamnThing on August 1, 2007, 12:09:46 PM
WARNING!!!:very rare!