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Chapter 1 - The Fallen Angel

Poetry describing my life... Nothing that would matter to you...

Chapter 1 - The Fallen Angel

Chapter 1 - The Fallen Angel
Plunging through the clouds down to earth
Hitting the ground, hard, and wet with tears.
I vanish at the moment true,
A dark red puddle then appears.
It takes a form,
Heavenly wings were ripped off, torn.
Grew instead were the wings of demons
When I attempted to fly once more.
I tried to show Him that I belong
I did my best to prove Lord wrong.
But Heaven rejects me
My wings don't work in the Realm of God.
And my true place Hell denies me having never sinned.
The victim of a tragic mistake,
An angel who fell out of Heaven for sins not committed
And denied by Hell for the reason same,
He remains on mortal earth forevermore waiting for nothing
Questioning these events and their meaning.
What is to become of Dante?
Will he remain this way?
That, nobody knows.

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mickyD503 on January 20, 2008, 11:51:05 PM

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mickyD503So... you are earth bound and rejected by heaven and hell, terribly depressing, how can you live your life of despiration?

TheForgotten on January 22, 2008, 11:30:44 AM

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TheForgottenI do not really live....... I simply exist..... And what I do now..... I simply tend to the empty household that was my parent's.... Care for my mother's roses...... Study in my father's laboratory....... Read in the library....... And write, of course....... Write as they wished of me.......

DragonGirl1136 on December 20, 2007, 11:43:02 PM

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DragonGirl1136...........

*wipes tear from eye* That's incredible. Really deep. *goes to throw away my pathetic poetry*

TheForgotten on December 21, 2007, 4:40:19 AM

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TheForgottenI thank you as well...

chaos_kitten8 on December 20, 2007, 9:19:01 PM

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TheForgotten on December 21, 2007, 4:39:53 AM

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TheForgottenThank you...

swampertgirl0504 on December 19, 2007, 12:57:13 AM

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swampertgirl0504hmmmm. Deep.

TheForgotten on December 19, 2007, 11:42:49 AM

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TheForgottenI suppose...

Graceful8Vampire8Godess8 on December 18, 2007, 12:22:23 PM

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Graceful8Vampire8Godess8Interesting... I like it. But it's interesting :)

TheForgotten on December 18, 2007, 12:23:27 PM

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TheForgottenThank you...