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Chapter 1 - Untitled

Just short poem i did out of boredom.

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
I've been waiting, for a long time.
I know you said that you'd come back when you've had enough time to get way from all of your pressure...
But isn't 9 months enough!?!?
I've been waiting, and waiting,
Holding my side of the charm necklace.
You promised me that as long as you keep one side, and i keep the other, we'll always be together....
But i want to be able to see you! to hear you!
to talk together, eat our meals together, and worry together.
I want to tell you all of the things that are on my mind, and i want to listen to you.....

Well in these past 9 months, i've been waiting at the spot we first met each other, everyday,
hoping i'll see you again here.
I can't take it!
One day you said to me, that you've had enough, and before i know it you've ran away.
and when i heard that, i couldn't believe it.
I was relieved when I received a letter from you, saying
"Dear ~~~,
I promise that i'll return when I've had enough time to get away from it all. I'm sorry i didn't give you a proper goodbye. And i'm sorry, but at the same time i'm happy to ever meet you. You were the first to ever understand me, and not expect me to be quiet and keep my thoughts to myself.. And i'm telling you, i'm promising you, that i'll return.
But in the meantime, keep your side of the friendship necklace, and if you do, we'll always be by each others side.
Love ~~~~"


I won't pressure you, and i won't yell at you....
but please, come home.


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omiyage_umi on March 16, 2006, 3:39:31 PM

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omiyage_umiwonderfully sad poem, i like. me: says to everyone, SEE MY WORK PLEASE

Enigma_Girl on February 16, 2006, 7:27:29 PM

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Enigma_Girlwoh, great job ^^

nocturne_dune on October 18, 2005, 3:36:00 PM

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nocturne_duneuhm, watch your tense, of some of the words you use. still, nice angsty writing. :)

Muffin on June 24, 2005, 7:11:41 AM

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Muffinwow!! tha's nice i luv it *favs*

sock_eater on June 16, 2005, 12:31:02 AM

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sock_eaterWow thats depressing. Good job.

pink-panther on June 5, 2005, 3:42:01 PM

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pink-pantherthats nifty! it should be a song! *faves*