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Chapter 16 - The Journey- Mili Kara Mocha, and Star's Story P1

Lol I changed the Title! We have custom made pokemon made by People ON FAC!*alot of them are mine*...But anyways We might even add your custom Pokemon To the Story!!! So Basically if you want to Start your Journey KEEP READING!

Chapter 16 - The Journey- Mili Kara Mocha, and Star's Story P1

Chapter 16 - The Journey- Mili Kara Mocha, and Star's Story P1
HEY EVERYONE!!! It's spring break here And I've decided to dig up this OLD chapter and submit it. It's not as long as it was. I lost like half of itBut oh well it's a chapter. Now it's time for Buisness... I WILL NOT add the next Chapter until 11 Out of the 20 of you READ and COMMENT on this chapter!!! Okay, I hope you like it and... Untill next time on The Journey =D




Mili: Come on!!

Mocha: *bursting in thru the doors, and running up to the desk the dean was currently at* We wana Battle the Gym Leader *everyone flashes their Trainer cards as they walk up to the desk*

Dean: Right this way…*leads everyone in side the Gym*

Lucky: whoa…

Kara: why is it So big…?

Dean: You’ll find out… STAR!!!

Star Had just finished Healing her Pokemon

Dean: more Challengers…

Star: All right!

Mili: I get to go first…

Star: Uumm…. Actually… I AM CHALLENEGING YOU ALL TO A BATTLE!!! If you all can Beat my first Pokemon You get the Badges… But if I win, Then you all must come in the Mines with me and help-

Dean: Here we go again…

Mocha: We except! And I think It would be fun to go in a Mine!

Lucky: YEAH! We except

Dashu: DASHU!!! *YEAH!!!*

Kara: This’ll be fun!!!

Steelix came out of it’s Pokeball

Star: I choose you Steelix… But you were Kind of supposed to wait until their Pokemon were chosen…

Dean: this will be a 4 on battle… GO!!!

Mili: a Steel type Pokemon? This Should be easy, Come on out! *her Vulpix Popped out*

Lucky: YEAH! Come on Dashu! *Dashu Jumped off his shoulder and onto the field*

Kara: Come on out…. NYATA!!!

Mocha: My marvelous Pea!

Everyone burst out laughing

Mili: Pea???

Mocha: Can’t we just get on with the Battle!?!


Star: Steelix USE Slam!!!


Lucky: Dashu Use Thundershock!!!

Mili: Flamethrower!!!

Mocha: You Too Pea!

Everyone giggled

Mocha: -.- Just use FlameWheel instead…

Kara: Ummm… USE QUICK ATTACK!!

Lucky: why quick attack?

Kara: becuz, If that Onix Slams Its Tail on Nyata’s tail I Will never forgive my self!

Mili: 0.0 Okay… EVERYONE!!! ATTACK!!!

Star: Ohh no… Fire and electric type’s! Steelix will be brought down in a second! Use DIG Buddy!

Steelix Prepared to go under as all The Pokemon Lunched their attacks and it was already to weak…

Lucky: Let’s Finish this…. THUNDERBOLT!!!

A small thunder bolt was summoned upon the steel Pokemon and it was Knocked out

Kara: aww man… I really wanted to fire the last Blow…

Lucky: Ohhh… Sorry…

Star: Steelix return!!! Dean I believe I’m on a losing streak…

Dean: maybe you would win More Battles if you Would just fight each trainer with all 3 of your Pokemon…

Star: Maybe…. Ohh well, *walks up to the group holding 4 badges* Here…. You all deserve these… *hands out the Badges*

Lucky, Kara, Mocha, and Mili: YEAH!!! We got our badges!

Mili: Come on lets go to the Hotel down the street and get some rest!!!

They went to the Hotel and got a room with 4 beds and Plopped on each of them and went to sleep… They woke up and Decided leave to Tenkia *Ten-k-I* City


Lucky: Are we there yet? We’ve Been walking for hours!

Kara: Okay I’m getting board…

Mocha: Me too! And Hungry!!!

Mili: Well, *Pulls out 4 Sandwiches* Here everyone! *Passes them out* This Should hold us off till we get to Tenkia city…

They ate their Food and were eventually at Tenkia City

Mocha: Come on lets go! I think The gyms This way!!!

Lucky: Think? Why do you just look in the Guide or on your Pokedex?

Mocha: Becuz I’m a girl and we have instinks! Come on lets go!!!
They Followed her

Kara: Okay Mocha, it’s time we take out a map or something!

Mili: Yeah Mocha I think we are seriously Lost!

Mocha: Just one more minute, I’m sure that it’s just around the corner…

They looked around the corner and saw Everyone setting up for the Grand Festival

Dana: *up on stage* Listen Here Leo, You have to Do the attack on the beat of the Music!

Leo: Okay, When I said that Doing a Musical and a Battle at the Festival would be cool, I didn’t Mean doing them together!!!

Mili: Hey, What are you all doing here?

Dana: We’re rehearsing for the grand Festival, But a better question is what are you doing here- *she saw lucky*

Lucky: Well We’re kind of lost and-

Dana: Say no more….. I will gladly help you *in thoughts* Hot hot hot….. HOTY!

Leo: *In her thoughts* I heard that -.- and he’s too young for you

Dana: *in head* a few years -.-, *Out loud* AND STAY OUT OF MY MIND!!!

Kara: What????

Dana: I mean uhh…

Lucky: Yeah what was that?

Dana: I was talking to Leo, we’re twins and he sometimes gets in my head, it’s

Leo *finishing her sentence* and Dana: Annoying…

Lucky: whoa…

Mili: Freaky O.O






Narrator- What will happen? Will Dana go after lucky, Or will He stay dedicated to his journey?!? NEXT TIME ON Pokemon-The Journey!!!

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Symphoniaprincess101 on June 27, 2008, 10:59:30 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101ok it was about time u updated><

Symphoniaprincess101 on April 8, 2009, 5:51:31 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101btw that was just too short-_-

mew54 on June 30, 2008, 3:05:08 AM

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mew54i never commented weird... anyway pea lolz

myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on April 12, 2008, 12:33:52 PM

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myartmaybebadbutatleastitrylulz [see, I'm different x3]

wolf-girl-ghost on April 7, 2008, 12:11:41 AM

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wolf-girl-ghostLulz awesomeness!!

cooleo on April 6, 2008, 11:41:21 AM

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cooleoawesome!

sheath:*laughes* pea...

me:what was that?

Sheath: nevermind...

sapphirestar7789 on April 6, 2008, 9:43:31 AM

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sapphirestar7789sweet! i'm referred to as Crys in here, right? lol

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 6, 2008, 10:51:40 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskyep ^^

mew54 on April 6, 2008, 6:44:21 AM

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mew54lol

TKxKari224 on April 6, 2008, 2:50:58 AM

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TKxKari224OMg! lol that was funny XD

boykingkilla on April 5, 2008, 6:29:10 AM

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boykingkillaHeh, This chapter was great! Why did it take you so long to get it done though buddy? Just curious. PLEASE DON'T HURT ME! * shield myself using my arm's.*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 6:38:58 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwell,Remember, I lost the original Chapter which was like 4 times longer than this. AND I had School crap, And I had to do a Bunch of shows. And I was failing math. And I was depressed becuz I had lost all the chapters to this story so I just kind of dismissed it from my mind. And NOW It's spring break and I promised I would add a chapter to every unfinished story. You will be able to see my to do list in a few minutes up on my profile XD.

boykingkilla on April 5, 2008, 3:33:23 PM

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boykingkillaCool, Thanks! *hugs*

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 6:03:18 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinder*blushes* Y do all the cutes one have to be younger...hey do u know a site of wut Lucky looks like...*thinking* maybe he will be lucky...Dana is kinda lustful believe it or not...hehehe

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 5, 2008, 6:04:44 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol your crazy XD

Lol IDK

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 5, 2008, 6:14:55 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderU SHOULD SO DO A SCENE BETWEEN THE 2!!!!!!

hey the reply system works again!