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Dragon Ball- Artificial

Dr.Gero may be gone but his Hatered of Goku Will never Die. Nor will his Lifes Work... To Create The Perfect warrior!

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Dr.Gero's Journal- http://www.fanart-central.net/story-51694.html

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Join Today!!!
Submitted: March 9, 2008 • Updated: March 9, 2008
Word count: 118 • Size: <1k • Comments: 61 • views: 345

Chapter 1 - The Destiny of The Dragon
Submitted: March 27, 2008 • Updated: April 16, 2008
Word count: 882 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 308

Chapter 2 - The Destiny of The Dragon
Submitted: April 17, 2008 • Updated: April 17, 2008
Word count: 495 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 268

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FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 17, 2008, 1:06:47 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYAY I NEW CHAPPY!!!


Yeah u need to add the color codes...I cant tell who it is...???

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on April 17, 2008, 1:17:53 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol you just want to be smart and lok at the color key and find out who the girls is -.-

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 17, 2008, 1:19:08 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderYep^^ u read me like a book dont u? Hey have u decided if ur gonna join that story? Cause i need some guys and firehead is working on his form and that leaves one more spot...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on April 4, 2008, 6:44:25 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHEY MY SKIN TONE IS MOCHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 28, 2008, 11:02:03 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderNO!!!!!!!!!!!U CANT DIE YET!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wait...ur not gonna die...im such a moron...

So can u tell me whats gonna happen on ur next chappy edit? Or r u gonna torture me


well i have 2 go...I'm finishing something up 2night and i want it done very soon! Trust me u'll love it!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 30, 2008, 8:23:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskget on line!

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 29, 2008, 5:59:06 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderHere's wut my outfit looks like...ur just to blonde to remember to ask ppl about that...


it looks exactly like thew Maks's on 'Dilated Love'

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 29, 2008, 6:13:12 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskokay cool ^^

why did you mention it?

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 29, 2008, 7:46:37 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderoh no reason...i figured it would give ppl a clear pic of wut our oc's look like...


oh and im not grounded so dont worry bout me! So whens the next edit?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 29, 2008, 7:59:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwhen my mom gets back from visiting Hilary Clinton! ^^

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 28, 2008, 8:25:13 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderEDIT SOON!!!!!!!!! WHILE IM FREE LIKE A BIRD!!!!!!!!!


sorry obut the cap locks...oh and good chappy so far! ad the reason i wasnt on last night is cause i was at a concert...i guess i like ppl with black hair and green high lites *drools*

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 28, 2008, 10:44:03 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol

Well I just updated it, but it's not finished yet. I got distracted and updated just incase I axedentally X-d it out ^^

Zalia13 on March 22, 2008, 4:01:00 AM

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Zalia13Name: Kurogin
Gender: Female
Species: Half Saiyen
Traites of Species:*Skin Color included as well as Any thing Special that Humans don't have* She has a serious attitude not to mention a kind heart like Gohan and she is always seen drawing or writing as if she is home schooled.
Is your Species Fan Made?: Well Duh! Yes!
Age: Gohan's age which I'm unsure on what it is.
Dream: To find out why she was sent to Earth, what happened to her parents, and then just kind of find a job when she gets a chance.
Physical Appearance: a normal size(5'4-5'5), Muscular for a child under 14, kind of an olive skin tone.
Hair: Black, and Saiyen blonde
Eyes: Black in normal state, then turn red in Saiyen form
Weapon/Equiptment: Physical attacks, Ki blasts, almost anything she can get her hands on
History: She comes to Earth and becomes friends with the DBZ characters, not to mention Gohan and Piccilo.
Phrases: "What's your Problem?" "I will never let you get all the fun." "Please tell me I did not just hear (or see) that." "I will not stop until you are in the ground dead." "You're mine!" And so on.
Attacks: Kamehameha wave, Raging Fireball, Wrath of the Dragon, Seal of the Enemy Dragon, and Finish Kamehameha Wave.
Why Do You Want the Dragon Balls?: To find out why my family has gone missing, and to gain a power to heal others.
Other Info: I have two sides, a light and dark side, and if my light side is gone, I will become unstoppable and if I get into the wrong hands, there is no telling what could happen. I also am a being of transforming myself into any shape and size, so I'm cursed with a shapeshifting stone in my chest.

Zalia13 on March 22, 2008, 4:02:17 AM

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Zalia13I also have a question, is this after the Cell Saga?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 22, 2008, 9:23:50 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskwaaaay after... It's a new saga

Zalia13 on March 23, 2008, 12:16:58 AM

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Zalia13Okay, anyway is this Saga way after Majuun Buu and DBGT? Or is it just after the Majuun Buu Saga?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 23, 2008, 8:54:37 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskIt's after ALL sagas ^^

Zalia13 on March 23, 2008, 11:04:22 AM

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Zalia13So it's not exactly a DBZ story is it. It's more like a GT Saga.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 26, 2008, 8:09:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol kind of but still waay after that. lol

Zalia13 on March 26, 2008, 12:32:48 PM

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Zalia13Okay dokay! What are you going to call this Saga? For example, the others were called Dragonball Z and Dragonball GT. So what are you going to call this awesome sounding one?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 27, 2008, 6:57:38 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskhttp://www.fanart-central.net/story-51694.htm

here check this out. there are many opportunities forthis story if you go here. You could find the dragon balls!

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 27, 2008, 5:18:45 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol No Idea. I'v been thinking of alot of names ^^'

OnyxTheHedgehog on March 19, 2008, 8:22:56 AM

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OnyxTheHedgehogto be honest DBZ really inst my thing.

Goka on March 17, 2008, 11:50:46 AM

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GokaName: San (Being her last name) Ebony
Gender: Female
Species: Terraion (Alien race from a planet called Terra)
Traites of Species: They have the same genetic make up as humans but are more powerful because they evovled to fight off the Saiyans when they came to attack their planet. There names are usally colours or types of wood (In any language)
Is your Species Fan Made?: Yes!
Age: Varies (Pending on what saga it is)
Dream: To be the feared female in the universe (because of her power), win a match against Goku and beat Vegeta when he's a super saiyan.
Physical Appearence: Average height (around 5,7 - 5,8), shoulder lenth hair (back of head is boy cut hair, right side of head has the most hair.) Slightly above average chest as well.
Eyes: Black
Weapon/Equipment: None
History: At the age of 12 the space she was on with her parents crash landed on earth, killing her parents. Ebony wondered around earth until she got run over by Goku on his flying cloud. When he apoligises he accidently pokes her in the eye with his magic staff causing it to bleed. He takes her back to Master Roshi's house to clean up. Since then her and Goku have been the best of friends (like brother and sister, so they kinda have brotherly/sisterly relationship), she even trained with Roshi and learnt the Kamehameha. She also dated Krillin for a short time during the 5 years between Dragonball and Dragonball Z. Back when her and Goku first met and she noticed his tail she knew he was a saiyan, just never said anything.
Phrases: "I hope you realise, i'm not youre average female!" | "Hey you punk!! I'm just as strong as those two. What are you afraid you'd lose to me?" | "I can do whatever you can do, just better" | (To Goku) "You Mellon!"
Attacks: "Kamehameha" | "Reapers Cradle" (A fury of large energy balls shot at the opponent) | "Solar Flare" | "Destructive Canon" (Large energy wave)
Why Do you Want the Dragon Balls?: The same reason as to why Goku and the others want them.
Other Info: She worries about her close friends when they do something noble, she's never died. Because of Earth's atmosphere she ages slower than everyone else. She's called Aunt Ebony and Gohan and Goten. Is nicknamed Ebs by Krillin. Finally In ranks on whos the strongest on earth (Goku being 1st and Vegeta being 2nd) Ebony is 3rd, gaining up closey against Vegeta.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 19, 2008, 5:03:03 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskHey How Are you feeling today?!?!?!?

Goka on March 19, 2008, 7:51:32 AM

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GokaJust as bad as yesturday

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 19, 2008, 7:53:39 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskreally?!?!?!? what makes everthing so bad?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 9:26:14 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol I hate to ask another question seeing you are very trouibled but... Whats the personality of your character XD

Goka on March 18, 2008, 9:28:31 AM

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GokaTo be honest i don't know myself.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 12:16:29 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskXD Fine

I'll try to make it close to your personality... well When your Not sick ^^'

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 17, 2008, 12:02:06 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol Your Character Just gave me a great idea! this is gona be great! XD

Goka on March 17, 2008, 12:02:33 PM

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GokaOoo can't wait, keep me posted

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 17, 2008, 11:59:33 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskAWESOME! TY FOR JOINING!!!

Your Profile is really nice!!! I might altar it a bit becuz you'll be one of my main characters *lol it'll be alot of fun*, But I don't see anything that really needs changing.


TY SO MUCH FOR JOINGING! XD

Goka on March 17, 2008, 12:02:15 PM

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GokaYou're Welcome!

=)

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:13:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskO and does your character have a Love intrest? if so, is it your fan made character?

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:14:42 AM

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GokaShe has a love interst but its not a fanmade charrie and ....stuff

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:18:31 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool who is the love interest ^^??? I had this really cool Idea...

What if Maks (falloutgirlAARHinder's char) Killed your characters love interest like 100 years ago or what ever? Read her character down at the bottom of the comments and read my comment to her aswell XD

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:19:59 AM

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Gokaerr well her love interest is Vegetto.....and it's complacted.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:25:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskXD lol wow, That would BE VERY complex... Cool!!!

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:25:49 AM

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Gokayeah, i guess

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:30:34 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol so... ooo oo IDEA! I Just had an Idea! I feel Like Albert Instine XD!!!

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:32:23 AM

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Gokayeah?

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:41:07 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskYou could Be the Kid of you OC!!!

OR

Your OC could Have a Kid and that's how you meet the gang

Lol thought still in progress XD

While I think YOU THINK TOO! XD It's hard, I'm only blond XD

Mean while Check this


http://www.fanart-central.net/story-51694.php

It has to do with this story ^^ You might like some of the drawings in there or they might give you ideas =D

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:43:44 AM

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GokaLook i don't feel that all good today so im not really up for doing anything, let alone this.

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:46:22 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskcool, I understand ^^, I could tell you were downby the '...'s after every sentence XD

It's okay I'll do All the thinking I'll just surprise you Besides I also Got my Co-Writers to help me out with this decision XD

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:10:49 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Maskokay I have a question for you...

For the story, you WILL look young, But do you want to BE young? Cuz I was thinking of like 3 different things...

1) You could be the master of the young heros

2) you could have something wrong with you *like being taken out of your own time or something.(reason I say is becuz of 1 of the other characters is has time traveling powers)*

3) or you could b young and tag along with the young heros NOT as their Mentor.

all three have intresting side plots XD. you don't have to choose just tell me what you think ^^

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:13:46 AM

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Gokaerr..well i dunno...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 6:15:46 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol well I don't want you to be TO surprised when the first chappy comes out XD...

What do ya think?

Goka on March 18, 2008, 6:17:12 AM

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Gokaits ok

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 18, 2008, 8:42:18 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderu never asked wut out personality was Leo...BIG mistake...

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 18, 2008, 8:18:56 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderi think i wanna be over 10,000 years old...

Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on March 18, 2008, 8:34:31 AM

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Tuxedo_Mini_Masklol maybe 2 more people! XD and you will probably be around like 200. lol But when you very first awaken you think your like 15! XD

FallOutGirlAARHinder on March 18, 2008, 8:37:15 AM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderSweet...i need to think of some ppl that like DBZ....hmmmm*light bulb appears but soon blows*