Chapter 1 - Blank
Submitted December 9, 2003 Updated December 9, 2003 Status Incomplete | Another one of my pathetic poems! yay!
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Chapter 1 - Blank
Chapter 1 - Blank
There's nothing there so stop looking.
The water's boiling over and the fire's going wild,
So come help me.
I could use a watchfull eye,
It's night and i'm starting to get nye.
So come and wake me up.
I'm lost in my dreams as you stare at the screen,
But it's still blank, what do you see?
Are you seeing me or someone else?
I'm dreaming, so come and wake me up,
Please don't let me drown.
I'm going under, going down.
I'm dead.
I could use a savior now.
Why didnt you catch me?
Free-falling from the sky
But you let me fall,
Like you let me drown.
Just staring at the blank and flickering screen.
So tell me, what do you see?
The water's boiling over and the fire's going wild,
So come help me.
I could use a watchfull eye,
It's night and i'm starting to get nye.
So come and wake me up.
I'm lost in my dreams as you stare at the screen,
But it's still blank, what do you see?
Are you seeing me or someone else?
I'm dreaming, so come and wake me up,
Please don't let me drown.
I'm going under, going down.
I'm dead.
I could use a savior now.
Why didnt you catch me?
Free-falling from the sky
But you let me fall,
Like you let me drown.
Just staring at the blank and flickering screen.
So tell me, what do you see?
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Umbra on January 28, 2004, 3:30:57 AM
Umbra on
'rooooooooooooooooooar'?
no rating for the poem? lol, j/k the chatroom hates you, KuGeLsChRiEbeR... sooo.... dont worry. they probably hate me too. (Happy birthday!!!)