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Chiyu- God of Cats

Yeah, kinda weird I think. Tell me what you think.

All of the gods in here are totally made up and I do not believe they exist.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Take me home
Submitted: September 20, 2006 • Updated: September 20, 2006
Word count: 676 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 207

Chapter 2 - Meow?
Submitted: September 21, 2006 • Updated: September 21, 2006
Word count: 758 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 151

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ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 6:14:58 PM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 2)
ladychaoscool chapter.
 
i don't think theirs too much talking in it, a good dialogue between characters is important, it alows the reader to establish what the relationship between the characters is. No dialogue atall would be like miming out the entire story which in some cases isn't a great idea, do you know what i meen?

ladychaos on September 21, 2006, 1:59:11 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 1)
ladychaoswow. cool story.
 
Chiyu sound so adorable.
 
keep it up