Chapter 4 - You Said Thank You
Submitted March 6, 2006 Updated March 26, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is just a collection of my poetry. My friend Ladaya_Solo bugged me at school to put my deviantART poems here so yah..here they are...
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Chapter 4 - You Said Thank You
Chapter 4 - You Said Thank You
I stood there
Nash nudging my shoulder
"I'm not giving it to him for you, you gotta do it yourself" She said
I looked at you
And my heart skipped a beat
And I let you walk by
Without even a hello
I was too afraid
To give you my valentine face-to-face
So I decided to make it easier
And I dropped it in your tenar sax case
The next day
As I go to put my flute away
You stop and say
"Hey Amanda.."
I look up at you
"Thanks."
And you smile
That cute smile of yours
That makes me melt
So I froze in place
Unable to speak
So I just smiled back
Do you like me?
How can I tell?
Right now my life..
It's like a living hell
But that smile brightened my day
And it's been so many hours
I'm here writing this poem about you
I'm still melting
And still getting chills
Nash is jealous
I had to rub it in her face
Cause that's just what we do
She laughed and made excuses
But I could tell
I think you like me
So help me get through this living hell
All I need is you
So come up and talk to me
Cause I think you can see
My shyness always
Gets the best of me...
Nash nudging my shoulder
"I'm not giving it to him for you, you gotta do it yourself" She said
I looked at you
And my heart skipped a beat
And I let you walk by
Without even a hello
I was too afraid
To give you my valentine face-to-face
So I decided to make it easier
And I dropped it in your tenar sax case
The next day
As I go to put my flute away
You stop and say
"Hey Amanda.."
I look up at you
"Thanks."
And you smile
That cute smile of yours
That makes me melt
So I froze in place
Unable to speak
So I just smiled back
Do you like me?
How can I tell?
Right now my life..
It's like a living hell
But that smile brightened my day
And it's been so many hours
I'm here writing this poem about you
I'm still melting
And still getting chills
Nash is jealous
I had to rub it in her face
Cause that's just what we do
She laughed and made excuses
But I could tell
I think you like me
So help me get through this living hell
All I need is you
So come up and talk to me
Cause I think you can see
My shyness always
Gets the best of me...
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Fatal_dreamer on July 4, 2006, 2:57:55 AM
that us soo cool .........i love this and it kinda reminds me of ........wel.............me lol anyway great rythem and llines and comparisins