Chapter 1 - Death for you
Submitted December 19, 2005 Updated December 19, 2005 Status Incomplete | I have some problems that ma friends dont understand; or i won't tell, either way. I wrote this when I was depressed.
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Chapter 1 - Death for you
Chapter 1 - Death for you
I live in pain,
I live in fear,
I live knowing I can't hold you near.
So I choose to stop it,
one quick swipe,
it'll all be over,
no need for life.
But its not the end,
as i sink to the floor,
I know that i'll love you forever more.
My blood spills out,
my soul soon gone,
I go pale and die,
You could have been the one.
I live in fear,
I live knowing I can't hold you near.
So I choose to stop it,
one quick swipe,
it'll all be over,
no need for life.
But its not the end,
as i sink to the floor,
I know that i'll love you forever more.
My blood spills out,
my soul soon gone,
I go pale and die,
You could have been the one.
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Gerardthedevil on August 2, 2007, 12:56:00 PM
Is it a poem? Its really good I like it. Really expressing your feelings. I dont know how you get over depression though its really hard, but nice work.Whatsername on December 23, 2005, 3:20:43 AM
Whatsername on
and you tell me i should write something cheerful! anyway, i know how you feel and i've been through it too.