Chapter 1 - Help
Submitted April 22, 2004 Updated May 14, 2004 Status Incomplete | this is a poem
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Chapter 1 - Help
Chapter 1 - Help
My breath is lost
I'm cold as frost
My heart is slowing
my blood stopped flowing
I feel pain sitting out in the rain
When all hope is lost I get the power to scream
and then I wake from my dream
I'm cold as frost
My heart is slowing
my blood stopped flowing
I feel pain sitting out in the rain
When all hope is lost I get the power to scream
and then I wake from my dream
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Darkness1313 on July 15, 2005, 8:53:56 PM
Darkness1313 on
It good...no great! And I know a thing or two about poems. I'm okay at writing poems so please check them out if you get the chance.Blackrose13 on July 17, 2004, 2:34:37 AM
Blackrose13 on
Wow, this sounds like a poem I would write, it's awesome!br
BloodySunAngel on May 12, 2004, 5:17:10 AM
That's wicked good! *immediate favorites* ^^ I love it!blackrose208 on May 8, 2004, 12:23:00 PM
blackrose208 on
thanks. I think is darkness good? AHHHHHHHHH!
sally_the_ragdoll on May 8, 2004, 11:51:16 AM
cool.....very dark. i like darkness! its good....like this poem...okay i'm done!WaterNeko_Goddess on May 8, 2004, 8:11:04 AM
wow! that's good!!!EvilCheeseDemon on May 2, 2004, 11:23:52 PM
hey thats pretty good