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this is a poem

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - Help
Submitted: April 22, 2004 • Updated: April 22, 2004
Word count: 43 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 144

Chapter 2 - Alone
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
Word count: 71 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 138

Chapter 3 - Confusion
Submitted: April 24, 2004 • Updated: April 24, 2004
Word count: 87 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 162

Chapter 4 - Escape
Submitted: April 24, 2004 • Updated: April 24, 2004
Word count: 73 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 148

Chapter 5 - The Wall
Submitted: May 14, 2004 • Updated: May 14, 2004
Word count: 53 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 178

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Darkness1313 on July 15, 2005, 8:53:56 PM

Darkness1313 on (Chapter: 1)
Darkness1313It good...no great! And I know a thing or two about poems. I'm okay at writing poems so please check them out if you get the chance.

Blackrose13 on July 17, 2004, 2:34:37 AM

Blackrose13 on (Chapter: 1)
Blackrose13Wow, this sounds like a poem I would write, it's awesome!

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BloodySunAngel on May 12, 2004, 5:17:10 AM

BloodySunAngel on (Chapter: 1)
BloodySunAngelThat's wicked good! *immediate favorites* ^^ I love it!

blackrose208 on May 8, 2004, 12:23:00 PM

blackrose208 on (Chapter: 1)
blackrose208thanks. I think is darkness good?
AHHHHHHHHH!

sally_the_ragdoll on May 8, 2004, 11:51:16 AM

sally_the_ragdoll on (Chapter: 1)
sally_the_ragdollcool.....very dark. i like darkness! its good....like this poem...okay i'm done!

WaterNeko_Goddess on May 8, 2004, 8:11:04 AM

WaterNeko_Goddess on (Chapter: 1)
WaterNeko_Goddesswow! that's good!!!

EvilCheeseDemon on May 2, 2004, 11:26:05 PM

EvilCheeseDemon on (Chapter: 2)
EvilCheeseDemonwow your pretty good

EvilCheeseDemon on May 2, 2004, 11:23:52 PM

EvilCheeseDemon on (Chapter: 1)
EvilCheeseDemonhey thats pretty good