Chapter 1 - Josie's Return To Tokyo
Submitted June 23, 2007 Updated June 24, 2007 Status Incomplete | A Fan Ficim writing baced off of an rpg i did well this is how i wanted it to happen
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Chapter 1 - Josie's Return To Tokyo
Chapter 1 - Josie's Return To Tokyo
"Passengers We Will Soon Be Landing In Tokyo Japan Please Fasten You seat Belts."Said the caption over the load speaker
Josie Fastened her seat belt and gazed out her window on to the city she had once know like the back of her hand "Daddy, what If My Friends forgot about me ill have to start over.What If Takaru Doesn't Remember me!
Joe Placed his hand on Josie's shoulder "Don't worry about it sweet pea i know in fact Takaru Never forgot about you she missed you every day!" he smiled.
Ryan Butted in from the seat behind "Yeah sis dad took care of that!"
"What was that Ryan?
"Ryan!" Joe pushed his son back in to the seat Right At the plane landed
Josie took a breath in disbelief that her one first friend would remember her but the smiling faces of her father and brother and the banner she could see coming out of the plane sayjng "Welcome To Tokyo,Japan!". Right Then then she knew she was finally home where she belongs.
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Takaru Looked at his watch "Mom Dad Face It Josie isn't coming back" Takaru Droped his "welcome home Josie" sign on the floor
"Takaru dont worry Joe called up a bit ago and said the flight was delayed an hour because of some fog around the air port in new york!"Kari gave him a smile
"Son Their Plan Just Landed Be ready"Tk Announced
Takaru picked up his sign and waited for his best friend to come threw the doors of the air port
Josie Fastened her seat belt and gazed out her window on to the city she had once know like the back of her hand "Daddy, what If My Friends forgot about me ill have to start over.What If Takaru Doesn't Remember me!
Joe Placed his hand on Josie's shoulder "Don't worry about it sweet pea i know in fact Takaru Never forgot about you she missed you every day!" he smiled.
Ryan Butted in from the seat behind "Yeah sis dad took care of that!"
"What was that Ryan?
"Ryan!" Joe pushed his son back in to the seat Right At the plane landed
Josie took a breath in disbelief that her one first friend would remember her but the smiling faces of her father and brother and the banner she could see coming out of the plane sayjng "Welcome To Tokyo,Japan!". Right Then then she knew she was finally home where she belongs.
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Takaru Looked at his watch "Mom Dad Face It Josie isn't coming back" Takaru Droped his "welcome home Josie" sign on the floor
"Takaru dont worry Joe called up a bit ago and said the flight was delayed an hour because of some fog around the air port in new york!"Kari gave him a smile
"Son Their Plan Just Landed Be ready"Tk Announced
Takaru picked up his sign and waited for his best friend to come threw the doors of the air port
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power9x on June 27, 2007, 2:11:02 PM
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Good so far, but doesn't have much lead in for itself yet. Needs more to itself. What I usually do to keep the reader in even through the nessicary preliminary stuff inorder to get to the main action in a latter scene with a flash forward, giving a taste of the action that makes them want to get into the characters and the plot. I can't judge your story yet, because it hasn't even gotten started. Now, there's a difference between complete and started. I can't judge it because were before the plot begins.