Digimon Adventure 03
Submitted June 23, 2007 Updated June 24, 2007 Status Incomplete | A Fan Ficim writing baced off of an rpg i did well this is how i wanted it to happen
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Chapter 1 - Josie's Return To Tokyo
Submitted: June 24, 2007 • Updated: June 24, 2007
Word count: 263 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 260
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sharp-fang on August 11, 2007, 9:35:10 AM
sharp-fang on (Chapter: index)
power9x on June 27, 2007, 2:11:02 PM
power9x on (Chapter: 1)
Good so far, but doesn't have much lead in for itself yet. Needs more to itself. What I usually do to keep the reader in even through the nessicary preliminary stuff inorder to get to the main action in a latter scene with a flash forward, giving a taste of the action that makes them want to get into the characters and the plot. I can't judge your story yet, because it hasn't even gotten started. Now, there's a difference between complete and started. I can't judge it because were before the plot begins.
Digimon rulez!