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My Book of Poems #1

Some of these are actually assignments from my English class last year but I thought I'd share them.  Tell me what ya think, okay?  This is supposed to help you see things in a different way.  That's why I write. Book 2 has arrived.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - A Blind Nation
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 49 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 161

Chapter 2 - An Unspoken Love
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 100 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 139

Chapter 3 - For the New Year 2007
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: February 25, 2007
Word count: 131 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 167

Chapter 4 - In My Head
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 96 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 143

Chapter 5 - In the Clouds
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 38 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 127

Chapter 6 - Life
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 64 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 144

Chapter 7 - My Finished Glory
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 56 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 145

Chapter 8 - My Online Love
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 79 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 155

Chapter 9 - My Shortest Poem
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 19 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 148

Chapter 10 - Natural Disaster
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 99 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 155

Chapter 11 - Nature
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 48 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 165

Chapter 12 - Ocean
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 64 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 144

Chapter 13 - Ode to Teachers
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 58 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 144

Chapter 14 - Questions
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 145 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 159

Chapter 15 - Reality of Death
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 137 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 224

Chapter 16 - Reality of Tragedies
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 248 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 140

Chapter 17 - Runs From Mother to Daughter
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 105 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 121

Chapter 18 - Secret of Life and Balance of the Universe
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 144 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 153

Chapter 19 - Shoes
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 130

Chapter 20 - The Bird in the Cage
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 68 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 148

Chapter 21 - The Night Before
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 53 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 143

Chapter 22 - The Road of Life
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 36 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 133

Chapter 23 - Worse Thing to Lose
Submitted: January 9, 2007 • Updated: January 9, 2007
Word count: 50 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 148

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DemonessDarkFlame on June 16, 2007, 3:20:17 PM

DemonessDarkFlame on (Chapter: 23)
DemonessDarkFlamei'm not christian. but i like this poem, short and to the point.

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:59:17 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 30)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxOh that's so sweet!!! Lucky them. To have a friend like you. So truthful and sweet. Honey, You'd be the best friend ever!

cloggdown123 on February 25, 2007, 10:43:30 AM

cloggdown123 on (Chapter: 30)
cloggdown123Thank you for reading these. I really, REALLY appreciate it.

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:54:22 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 29)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxAww:]
If I were that teacher I would give you like 20 0000000 out of 10 :/ That works...O_O

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:53:19 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 28)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxThat would be smart! It makes me sad to just think of it:/:/

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:52:38 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 27)
xXEddyxXxLoverXx*Giggles* That's like all the guys in my grade! It's like lower than their butt.
So they half to walk gangsta looking to make sure they don't fall down.

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:51:11 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 26)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxLol! :]:] ....These are REALLY short commentsOo

I guess I gotta do 30 of 'em:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:50:19 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 25)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxAww! *Glomps* That's so sweet!!! :]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:48:40 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 24)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxThat's like me:] I guess I can describe mysef like that now!!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:47:27 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 23)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxI do not beleive in god myself but I guess it is a path to follow!!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:46:34 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 22)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxThat is A VERY good way to explain it:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:45:04 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 21)
xXEddyxXxLoverXx*Claps* My eyes hurt from reading all of these poems lol!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:44:03 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 20)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxYes it does! It's so sad to see them trapped in there..

I mean...how would you like it if someone locked you up?

It's like being put in Jail because they wanted to stare at you all day..

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:42:36 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 19)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxShoes are awesome. I luff shoes:]
Magnificent!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:41:44 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 18)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxwow. Then what's OUR roles? :]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:40:50 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 17)
xXEddyxXxLoverXx:] That's cool!!
I think I got my musical and Artistic talent from Mum and Auntie! :]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:39:13 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 16)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxO_OMy tragedy hasn't come! Oh no! It will come?
Well my dog died...Does that count?
Or do you mean like mean a massive tree fell on my aunties and nanas house?
Or like when my cat died?
Or maybe when my uncle died of cancer?
Or MAYBE when my grandma and grandpa burned to death?

Maybe......

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:35:30 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 15)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxARGH!! FREAKY!! *Runs away*

*Hides behind leaf*

*Peeps head out* Is she gone yet? OH NO!! *Squeals*

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:34:01 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 14)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxI have done 11 of those. :] Yes, I counted lol.
This world is dumb! No, no. But John Howard needs to sign the kyoto protocole! We were talking about it in English today:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:32:04 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 13)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxI LUFF WRITING!!! :]:] It's REALLY fun!! I wanna write right now btu I don't know what to do for the next chapter:O

Brilliant work!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:30:44 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 12)
xXEddyxXxLoverXx*Glomps* You are wayyyy too good, honey!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:29:59 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 11)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxStorms! Are....scary...but AWESOME!! At the same time:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:29:13 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 10)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxLol. I AM nuts. If I wanna:]:]

*Starts commenting on every single one of your poems*

They're too good:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:28:01 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 9)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxLife is everything because without life we would be nothing..
And life is nothing because?????

I like understanding my poems:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:26:25 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 8)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxDoes he love you back?
'Cause lots of people meet over the internet!
At least you didn't MEAN to fall in love..like go on one of those dating systems

Quote: "A chance on love...So unplanned"

:]

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:24:53 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 7)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxI love it when you write a story and your proud of it.
I'm like SQUEEE!!

Except...I would never show mum...my...*CoughYaoiCough*

oO

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:23:45 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 6)
xXEddyxXxLoverXx:] True, true. 'Tis all true!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:23:01 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 5)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxoO COOL! *Adventures to the castle on the cloud*

WOOT! MONEY! oO Lol I loved it again!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:21:56 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 4)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxI have a world inside my headxD
A world where I have Joey as mine...
And mine forever
And he loves me
And I love him back

But I guess that won't happenT_T

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:20:09 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 3)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxThat is..........so true!!

Oh I think when you said

That
We all ha
More common
Sense.

You meant "We all HAVE"

Just thought I might point that out^^

I loved it once again! Great work!

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:18:13 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 2)
xXEddyxXxLoverXxThat happens sooo much to meT_T
Except then of course, he ends out finding out I'm like oO crap...
I luff your Poem writing!!!!!! *Faves*

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on February 14, 2007, 7:10:52 PM

xXEddyxXxLoverXx on (Chapter: 1)
xXEddyxXxLoverXx*Stares in shock*

:O That was AMAZING!! Lmao I wanna comment!! *Glomps you and your sadness*

But that was brilliant!! *Nodds*

cloggdown123 on February 14, 2007, 1:03:30 PM

cloggdown123 on (Chapter: 30)
cloggdown123These are just Valentine's Day poems for friends.

cloggdown123 on January 29, 2007, 11:16:00 AM

cloggdown123 on (Chapter: index)
cloggdown123*starts to cry*  No one wants to comment on anything I do!!!!!  *water falls of tears spew from my eyes*  WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!