Chapter 1 - Wished to have spoken
Submitted May 23, 2006 Updated May 23, 2006 Status Incomplete | a poem of feelings that i have not expressed
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Chapter 1 - Wished to have spoken
Chapter 1 - Wished to have spoken
<p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">Carrying the one still loved, once loved.<br />Wanting to share but cannot share.<br />Remembering her smile makes me smile,<br />But brings me sorrow.</font></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"></font></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">To smell her hair,<br />To feel her warmth,<br />To embrace her I would do anything.<br />To give anything,<br />To have a new memory of her.</font></p><p> </p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">I wish to tell you,<br />The words that you wished to hear,<br />The words I felt but never spoke.<br />I wish to tell you,</font></p><p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">I love you.<br /></font></p>
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_theater_freak_147 on September 4, 2006, 2:26:21 AM
Oh that was so good! Simply Beautiful!FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on July 18, 2006, 6:28:49 AM
Aww, I like it. Blunt, but you managed to make it work in a pretty and emotional way. I love the line, "Carrying the one still loved, once loved" too. Nice work. Keep it up! =)
Amaya_LOD on May 23, 2006, 5:49:14 AM
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beautiful,...what else to say...keep it up,I love your writing