Chapter 1 - To End...
Submitted June 6, 2004 Updated June 6, 2004 Status Incomplete | This is more of a short pome...
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Chapter 1 - To End...
Chapter 1 - To End...
To End...Hello stranger...
Are you living your life?
Carefree and having fun?
While other's, like me
Are living an undieing dream
Torn between reality
And fantasy...
And you
Not knowing...
But you say
Know what?
For this undieing dream
To end.
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Are you living your life?
Carefree and having fun?
While other's, like me
Are living an undieing dream
Torn between reality
And fantasy...
And you
Not knowing...
But you say
Know what?
For this undieing dream
To end.
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Slippingthroughreality on December 2, 2004, 8:51:09 PM
Short and straight to the point I think this poems is really good because you can feel the emotion and thats what makes real poetry. Well done!disturbed_goth on June 7, 2004, 9:22:35 AM
Thanks! I think it sucks... I think all my art work and pomes suck...GothRockgrl on June 7, 2004, 9:19:46 AM
GothRockgrl on
eee!! i luv that!! ur poems r mad awesome dude! keep it up!!*loox at mine..shredds* i hate my poems and art compaired to urs...*cries*