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Chapter 1 - heartbroken

was heart broken
my bf broke up with me
after 3 months
because i was too shy and didnt dance with him

Chapter 1 - heartbroken

Chapter 1 - heartbroken
Look upon my face
And tell me what you see
Do you see a woman?
Or a monster underneath

Or do you see another thing
Within my very eyes
Do you see the hatred?
That feels me with despise

Can you tell that im not that nice?
Do you back away?
Do you know how I feel?
When others seem to mind?

They might make me want to think
That they truly care
But they do not give a damn
They don’t even know the hurt that is inside

They might try and pressure me
But I will back away
They might try to tell me
That everything will be okay

I will not let these feelings
Eat me from inside
I will not let these people
Tell me how to thieve

I care no less for what they say
I will not let them see
The feelings that are inside
And they way that I see me

I feel my strength decreasing
I feel the need to die
I just want to be somewhere
Were my pain will pass by

I tell everybody
To just leave me alone
I ignore everybody
That tells me that im not alone

I feel the need to die
I just want to see
I don’t understand
Why he never loved me...

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vesblondie on June 11, 2007, 1:41:52 AM

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vesblondie...Katie. I'm sorry for what happened.
This is a sad poem...but so well written.

TallestPurple on June 11, 2007, 1:26:24 AM

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TallestPurpleAwww, sad poem, but you did it very well, Katie!!