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Chapter 1 - Invites

New year party at the Hyuga manor. All the Naruto characters celebrating the upcoming New year. With music,dancing,food,and some romance.Sorry I'm stoping with this story just for a little while.

Chapter 1 - Invites

Chapter 1 - Invites
Disclaimer:I dont own Naruto or any of the other characters. (by the way they are ninja in this story amd they are about 16)



There was knock on Naruto's door,he got up from his kitchen table he was in the middle of eating a bowl of ramen.



Naruto thought'Who could be knocking on my door,I was just in the middle of eating my yummy ramen,I swear if this is for something stupid and they are interuping my ramen and me they are gunna get.....' by that time he was opening the door.

"Oh hello Hinata and Sakura-chan!"said Naruto with his foxy grin

"Whats up?"asked Naruto

"W-w-well I was w-wondering if you wanted to you don't have to but if you want to-" she was cut off by Sakura

"Just get on with it Hinata!"said Sakura impatiently

"If you wanted to come to the New Years Eve party we are having at the Hyuga manor!"said Hinata quickly, with a mad blush on her face,handing Naruto the invite

"Well,of course I want to come believe it!"said Naruto exited

"Great"said Sakura elbowing Hinata,she was still in shock

"Marvelous!"said Hinata coming out of her shock

"Well we have to go we still have more people to give invites to even,though Ino and Tenten are delivering some we have lots of places to be,so bye see you at the party!"said Sakura

"Oh and Naruto,"said Sakura just remembering "this is a formal event by the way so dress in a kimono and the proper atire."

"Byebye can't wait to see you at the party,Naruto-kun!"said Hinata with a slight blush

"Ok bye see you guys at the party,can't wait also Hinata!"said Naruto with his foxy grin

"Hinata,wait til we get outside to faint."whispered Sakura joking around

But Hinata was really trying not to faint and as soon as they did get outside she squealed then fainted. Sakura sweatdropped then giggled.
Hinata woke up within about thirty seconds.

They went on their way again delivering more invites.

They finished their half of the invites exept they need to go to the Hokage's office so they could send the three Sand Ninja's invites with a bird and to give Tsunade and Shizune their invites and a few another nin.

"Thank God we are done!"said Sakura wiping her forehead as they came out of the Hokage's tower(or what ever it is)

"Uh Sakura-san...."said Hinata with timidness in her eyes

"Yah?"asked Sakura

"We still have a few more nin,like some of the Senseis,some Jounin,and some other people..."said Hinata quietly so if she didn't hear her she would just do whatever. Didn't work!

"Damn,oh well lets get going."said Sakura depressed

"Ok,well we should hurry so we can get something to eat."said Hinata with growl from her stomach agreeing

"Here you are Kakashi-sensei."said Sakura handing him the invite what Kakashi didn't know is that they told him on his invite to be three hours early so he would actually be on time and they knew he would be to lazy to ask anyone else about the time.Then they left with Sakura giggling to herself.

"Kurenai-sensei,will you come?"asked Hinata handing her the invite

"Of course my sweet Hinata and darling Sakura!"said Kurenai sweetly

"Now then Hinata we still have more people to go to so lets keep moving,see you at the party Kurenai-sensei!"said Sakura

"Sakura,Hinata did you girls remember to tell Kakashi three hours early ,because you know how late he can be?"asked Kurenai

"Of course I have to live with his tardyness everyday so we put three hours earlier on his invite."said Sakura

"Well,we will see you at the party Kurenai-sensei byebye!"said Hinata

"Bye!"said Sakura

"Good bye girls!"said Kurenai

"Next is the hospital."said Hinata

"We can check if Tsunade-sama and Shizune-sama are coming we left the invites but they weren't there and we will be able to give the nin their's too."said Sakura plesently because after the hospital they would be done.

On their way to the hospital they saw someone in the bushes peeping on some girls playing in the waterfall.

Hinata tapped his shoulder and he turned around.

"Jiraiya-sama what are you doing?"asked Hinata

"Well my fine,arousing ladies I am now looking at two provoking girls!"said Jiraiya with a smirk on his face

Then he got out a notepad and pencil and started drawning.

"Hinata,are you sure we should invite him?"whispered Sakura creeped

"Yes,of course he may be pervy but he is a Sannin."whispered Hinata

"Hey Ero-sennin,what are you doing you are suppose to be helping me with my training-oh hi Hinata and Sakura-chan!"said Naruto

"H-Hi Naruto-kun!"said Hinata with a blush on her face

"Hello Naruto."said Sakura

Naruto looked over at Jiraiya to see what he was doing to keep him from helping him. He saw that he was drawing he got closer to see what he was drawing he was drawing Hinata and Sakura undecent. Naruto took the notepad away from Jiraiya. Naruto's face got beat red with a trinkle of blod coming from his nose then......

"DAMN YOU ERO-SENNIN,HOW COULD YOU DRAW SOMETHING LIKE THAT,THAT IS SUCH A VILE THING TO DO TO HINATA AND SAKURA,AND I SWEAR IF YOU EVER DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS AGAIN YOU WILL PAY GREATLY,OH JUST WAIT UNTIL I TELL OBAA-CHAN,SHE IS GUNNA KILL YOU!"said Naruto as he started to run towards the hospital going to give Tsunade the picture,with Jiraiya running after him and with Hinata and Sakura looking stunned and unaware of whats going on.



Hinata and Sakura just went on their way to the hospital in silence embarressd in what just happened being told all that stuff by that perv.

They arrived at the hospital giving the invites to some of the people then they went to Tsunade and Shizune's own private patient room where they heard yelling and someone crying and apologizing. They knocked on the door Naruto answered it with a grinn on his face pleased that the perv was getting beat.

"Hi Sakura-chan,hi Hinata,whats up?"said Naruto

"W-well we just wanted to s-see if Hokage-sama and Shizune-sama are coming to the party,are they avalible?"said Hinata curious to know what was going on.

"Well,I'll get Shizune-sama,one sec..."said Naruto

Shizune came out of the room relieved that she didn't have to stay their any longer.

"Shizune-sama what is going on and what was Naruto going to show Tsunade-sama?" asked Sakura still curious to know what happened

"Well,I'll let Naruto or Tsunade-sama tell you."said Shizune as she started back in the room to get Naruto

"Wait Shizune-sama are you and Hokage-sama able to come to my New years eve party?"asked Hinata

"Well,I think we think we would be able to let me check with Tsunade-sama."said Shizune

"Girls you can come into the room." yelled Tsunade

The girls walked into the room and saw Jiraiya on the floor crying and Naruto snickering then when he saw them he turned bright red and started staring at the ground.

"Naruto you BAKA why are you staring at the ground and turning red as soon as we walk in?!"asked Sakura

"Sakura-san don't yell at Naruto he proboly has a reason for it."said Hinata with a blush coming to her face

"Ok fine,now what is going on here and what happened before you better answer me Naruto!?"said Sakura with a glare

"Naruto,would you like me to tell them?"asked Tsunade,Naruto nodded

"What is it Sensei?"asked Sakura

"Well this big Pervert over here,"said Tsunade pointing at Jiraiya "was drawing an obscene picture of you two and Naruto took it from him and gave it to me and I am giving this Perv what he deserves and you girls are welcome to see the photo and also injur this Pervert in any way you think is just."said Tsunade


Sakura having the strenghth she has went over to Jiraiya laying on the floor groaning and punched him in the face and then kicked him where no sun shines.
Hinata being the shy girl she is just blushed wildly and hid behind Shizune who was hiding behind Tsunade because they both did not want to get looked over by the Perverted Sage. Naruto still looking down at the ground.

"Tsunade-sama are you coming to the New Years Eve party at the Hyuga manor?"asked Sakura done kicking the perv,he was groaning so much and loudly you would be able to hear him through out all of the hospital.

"Yes of course Shizune and I will be there."said Tsunade

"Ok thank you Hokage-sama, well we should go I'm really hungry,what about you Sakura-san?"asked Hinata

"Yes I am too,lets go."said Sakura before she left she kicked Jiraiya in the no sun zone one last time and Hinata gave him a sad look like he is the most pathetic thing on earth.

"Naruto,do you want me to dispose of this picture or would you feel better if you hold onto it so it won't be seen by anyone?"questioned Tsunade giving a glare towards Jiraiya.

"If its okay i would like to keep it so no shall ever see this picture."said Naruto

"Thats fine I know you wouldn't look at this unhealthy picture of Hinata and Sakura."said Tsunade and she handed Naruto the picture and she kept the rest of the notepad so Jiraiya could not look at any of the other pictures.

Naruto kicked Jiraiya a few more times once in the no sun zone ,his legs,and his chest. Then Naruto left to get something to eat at Ichiraku ramen.

Hinata and Sakura arrived at Ichiraku,they sat down and ordered a bowl of hot ramen and a cup of soothing tea. Their ramen and tea came,first they had a sip of tea to calm their nerves then they started at their ramen.

When a boy came and sat at his regular seat which is right next to where Hinata is sitting.

"My regular ramen please."said Naruto

The girls looked up from their ramen and saw Naruto.






Now:Its late at night and I just finnished the first chappe of this so forgive me if its messed up.I wanted to take a break from Naruto:Last years of Middle School to do something with New years.I was going to finnish this last night but I went over to my Aunties so didn't get a chance sorry.I'm totally going to continue this I think its pretty ok so far I really like this consept but is no one else does I won't continue,so please if you liked this story comment so i can keep working!Comments are very much loved and Nity Nite.*falls asleep on keyboard*zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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zerotimberwolf on February 10, 2008, 9:57:12 AM

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zerotimberwolfmako: Hey Jiraya!

Jiraya: *wines* what?

mako: Time to teach you a lesson pal...Hellfire jutsu! *Burns him in no sun shine zone* my work here is done

eelchic on February 10, 2008, 9:59:16 AM

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eelchiclolz ^^

musicismylife on December 30, 2007, 6:17:17 AM

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musicismylifeyay!!!! lol jiraya= "unhealthy" pictures. *kicks Jiraya in no sun zone* Go jump in a hole u perv!!! *continues kicking in no sun zone* Tsunade: u gonna stop anytime this century? Me: nope ^_^

eelchic on December 30, 2007, 6:21:03 AM

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eelchiclolz he so deserves it see what happens to him later!!!!

nextguardian on December 29, 2007, 1:15:27 PM

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nextguardianlol, the poor pervy sage! (winces)!

lol, great chapter!

eelchic on December 29, 2007, 1:28:24 PM

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eelchicOh no he got what was coming to him drawing naked pictures of 15,16 year old girls lolz!!! jk i feel bad for him if you read the manga,that chapp was a tribute to him!!!! and thnank you very muchums!!!! ^^

winxgirl21 on December 29, 2007, 9:28:07 AM

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winxgirl21Awesome so far! Can't wait to read more! ^-^

eelchic on December 29, 2007, 9:32:56 AM

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eelchicThank you!!! I'm tote gunna write more!!!

winxgirl21 on December 29, 2007, 9:36:30 AM

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winxgirl21yay! let me know when you get it up! ^-^

eelchic on December 29, 2007, 9:37:47 AM

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eelchicOK!!!! ^^

winxgirl21 on December 29, 2007, 9:38:47 AM

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winxgirl21Thankies! ^-^

eelchic on December 29, 2007, 9:48:50 AM

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eelchicYOUR WELCOMEUMS!!!!!^^

Kohakucrazy on December 29, 2007, 8:45:28 AM

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KohakucrazyWrite more please.. this is good...


* kicks Jiraya where the sun don't shine* Bad Pervy sage bad.... * kicks him in the shin* Bad.... * starts whacking him with a rolled up newspaper*

eelchic on December 29, 2007, 8:51:56 AM

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eelchicOk I mite if more people like it!!!!!! Thats funny he deserves all the kicks coming

AlleyCat17 on December 29, 2007, 12:21:34 AM

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AlleyCat17wow really good story and very funny to anyways i hope you add a new chapter soon please.

eelchic on December 29, 2007, 12:42:58 AM

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eelchicthanks I was laughing almost the whole time I wrote the Jiraiya thing,and I hope to keep it up!!!!!!