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Chapter 1 - Lonely

i've just felt this way for a while, and i kinda needed to get it out of my system...sorry if it's not that great. i want to be able to write poetry better esp for ap eng next year. please tell me wot you think of it=]

Chapter 1 - Lonely

Chapter 1 - Lonely
Why do I feel so lonely
When I have so many friends around?
Why do I feel so lonely
Even though were always bound?
Why do I feel so lonely
Even though the answer is found?

I know why I feel so lonely.
I know why I feel so sad.
My heart was broken.
And all that came from it was bad.
I smiled and pretended
But all I did was lies.
I smiled and pretended
But I knew I slowly died.

Yet the phoenix will rise from the fire
Like its done a many times before.
My actions will be dire
But Im glad I wont feel that way anymore.

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PaInSgRuDgE3460 on June 18, 2007, 10:59:26 AM

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PaInSgRuDgE3460I like it! It's true cause you'll feel shootty but you're always gonna get better. =D

NICE!