Chapter 1 - ROSE
Submitted March 3, 2005 Updated March 3, 2005 Status Incomplete | Well this is just a little poem. Which doesn't rhyme. That i wrote during Lunch recess.
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Chapter 1 - ROSE
Chapter 1 - ROSE
ROSE
A rose signifies life,
It is both beautiful; like the happiest of moments,
It smells sweet; just like the many fragrances of this world.
And yet there is both something dangerous and sad about it.
It dies quickly like many hopes and dreams,
It has its thorns like every person in this world
And like us it wilts;
In to an old being until it fades away into nothing but memories.
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This is something I wrote in 2 minutes during Lunch recess at school so it sucks. But this is what a rose means to me to me it signifies life. Well tell me what you think. THANKS!!!
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Tachzaruu on February 12, 2006, 6:21:25 PM
Tachzaruu on
It is simple, yet it bears a powerful messagemikita_inugirl on January 11, 2006, 7:23:49 AM
I like it. It's very true. ^_^ love_bunny on November 13, 2005, 11:21:06 AM
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Very Pretty. ^_^