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Chapter 1 - Whispers in the Wind

Ummm...about some1(ME!) who was going through a hard time and then turned to God.

Chapter 1 - Whispers in the Wind

Chapter 1 - Whispers in the Wind


English~8

12/6/04



Whispers in the Wind

I've heard the voice before,

but didn't always choose to listen.

I went through life making my own decisions;

instead of asking someone for guidance.

Making things hard for myself;

without realizing,

I could ask God for help.

Their was always my conscience,

or so I thought,

that seemed to speak to me,

like whispers in the wind.

I got frustrated,

Arguing with myself.

And decided,

that I would go my own ways.

I should've listened to that voice,

because it was God.

Even as I pushed away,

Tried fighting it,

He kept speaking,

But the voice got weaker and weaker.

I slowly got stuck where I was;

Lost in the world,

Then I finally fell,

And had no one to pick me up.

I cried out to God,

And heard a gentle,

caring voice.

It was like a whisper in the wind,



~By: Gabby Garcia~



Behind the Story: As all people do, I went through a hard time before I found God. I wasn't saved until I was in sixth grade. I knew about God, but didn't choose him. I kept pushing Him away, until it was the only thing I could turn to. Finally, I turned my heart, and He told me how He wanted me to live.

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Katibird93 on July 16, 2007, 11:50:15 AM

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Katibird93Wow! That was really good! Awesome job! You are a good poet! **Snaps Fingers** Yea! faves!

I_luv_jesus on December 15, 2004, 12:25:54 PM

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I_luv_jesusOh yeah!! *favs*

I_luv_jesus on December 15, 2004, 12:25:08 PM

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I_luv_jesusThat totally rocks Gabby!! I luvs it. Great job!! I can't wait to see more!

Barnabee161 on December 8, 2004, 8:08:02 AM

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Barnabee161I am sorry about hobbie but that was probly not me on at the time it was a friend of mine if want to talk to him about it be my gust and yes he is rude hie emails well ill get that in one second but his name jake don't tell him I said his name all right personaly if that was on harry potter I don't look up at thoughs pics but I don't make fun of peopples work never