Chapter 1 - Hell
Submitted March 25, 2004 Updated March 25, 2004 Status Incomplete | just a simple poem with i think is pretty good check it out.
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Chapter 1 - Hell
Chapter 1 - Hell
I’m stumbling over all the bodies,
All the bones just lying all over the floor,
I’m calling,
But no one answers,
But still I wonder,
Who did this?
Why?
What happened?
Why am I here?
Why aren’t I dead?
While walking I fall,
I fall through a whole,
A dark black whole,
It swallowed me up into darkness,
It still smelled of death and hatred,
And then a body,
A dark body,
It seemed like just a shadow,
It stabbed me,
But I did not feel,
I felt nothing,
Only did I feel the bodies,
The bones under my feet,
Then I feel,
And I became a prisoner to this cave of death.
All the bones just lying all over the floor,
I’m calling,
But no one answers,
But still I wonder,
Who did this?
Why?
What happened?
Why am I here?
Why aren’t I dead?
While walking I fall,
I fall through a whole,
A dark black whole,
It swallowed me up into darkness,
It still smelled of death and hatred,
And then a body,
A dark body,
It seemed like just a shadow,
It stabbed me,
But I did not feel,
I felt nothing,
Only did I feel the bodies,
The bones under my feet,
Then I feel,
And I became a prisoner to this cave of death.
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me_miroku_luver_01 on April 9, 2004, 9:51:08 AM
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