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Chapter 1 - Untitled

i wrote this for creative writing class in like 5 mins. so if it seems rushed thats because it is. the assignment we got was we were supposed to write a poem containing a surreal sentence that we wrote on a different day. in this poem the last line i

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled


You love clowns, Clowns love you

Oh happy little clown

What a character you are

Honk, honk goes your horn

A smile curving your lips

Your red paint is smeary, dripping towards your chin

Oh happy little clown

Why are you so smiley?

Your lips part, revealing your teeth

They are sharp as knives,

Stained red

Oh happy little clown

Your eyes, they show hunger

You begin to come towards me

Grinning ear to ear

I warn you to stop

Oh happy little clown

Why were you so mean?

On you chin, that wasn't paint, but blood

You made me pop all the balloons

When I burst into a thousand daggers


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sesshylover on May 7, 2006, 11:53:39 PM

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sesshylover YOU STUIPED PERIAFILE!!! YOU CRADIEL ROBBER!!!!!! STOP TAKING ADVANTAGE OF THE LIITLE KID IN YOU HEAD!! HE DOESN'T KNOW!! wait what am i talkng about wrong person....... n onono and STOP LISTENING TO THE DANCING PENCIL!!!!! IT DOESN'T KNOW EVERYTHING!!



~clowns are scray ..

sanCheezers_mwah on March 24, 2006, 2:05:24 AM

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sanCheezers_mwahTIS GOOD ...THE BEST CLOW STO.....WAIT...CLOWNS!?...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

sesshylover on March 20, 2006, 6:42:23 AM

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sesshyloverhaley stop smoking that stuff before you write poems! the dancing pencil doesn't always help!! awesome poem baka! haha 0__

ham_chan on March 19, 2006, 9:53:21 PM

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ham_chanwow! very good! i luv the idea of this poem! an evil clown. very funny.

god i'm sad. giving the first comment on my poem. :( i just could cry! :P