Chapter 0 - PROLOGUE
Submitted August 1, 2008 Updated June 29, 2009 Status Incomplete | One day when Blazestar is named leader of ShadeClan all goes wrong... Mean while Riverclaw is fighing for the right decison. Will he try to kill Blazestar or will he let his clan build up into a super clan with killing and violence?
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Chapter 0 - PROLOGUE
Chapter 0 - PROLOGUE
Prologue
Did you here that Flamestar died? Riverclaw whispered to his friend Clawpelt. Yup he answered. And its probably the worst thing thats happened to us. Clawpelt growled. Riverclaw nodded in agreement. With Blazeclaw as leader of ShadeClan all there would be is violence and death.
How dare you come back here with no prey? Blazestar yowled at Clawpelt. There was no prey! He said shakily. Well go out again, and if you still cant find anything get lost! Blazestar yowled with rage.
Riverclaw you go with him! Now get out of my sight! Blazestar growled. With that the two cats sped out of camp.
Riverclaw Im .im leaving. Clawpelt spoke in a low voice. WHAT?! Riverclaw yowled. Where would you go?! Far away from Blazestar. He replied.
Riverclaw gazed in sorrow as his friend waved his tail in fair well. Good bye my old friend, I will miss you and never forget you. Riverclaw murmured to him.
Ill miss you too, we will meet again one day my friend
Did you here that Flamestar died? Riverclaw whispered to his friend Clawpelt. Yup he answered. And its probably the worst thing thats happened to us. Clawpelt growled. Riverclaw nodded in agreement. With Blazeclaw as leader of ShadeClan all there would be is violence and death.
How dare you come back here with no prey? Blazestar yowled at Clawpelt. There was no prey! He said shakily. Well go out again, and if you still cant find anything get lost! Blazestar yowled with rage.
Riverclaw you go with him! Now get out of my sight! Blazestar growled. With that the two cats sped out of camp.
Riverclaw Im .im leaving. Clawpelt spoke in a low voice. WHAT?! Riverclaw yowled. Where would you go?! Far away from Blazestar. He replied.
Riverclaw gazed in sorrow as his friend waved his tail in fair well. Good bye my old friend, I will miss you and never forget you. Riverclaw murmured to him.
Ill miss you too, we will meet again one day my friend
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platypusluver on March 27, 2009, 11:42:29 PM
That's sad!DancingWithFire on January 25, 2009, 5:27:18 AM
i love it :]BlackSnowFire on August 10, 2008, 2:33:21 PM
This Story Is THE BEST lmao XPicestorm on August 11, 2008, 12:10:26 AM
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^///^ Why thank you! =DFalconlobo on August 9, 2008, 11:55:36 AM
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cool story part oneicestorm on August 9, 2008, 12:26:48 PM
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Thanks! ^^Falconlobo on August 9, 2008, 12:33:56 PM
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you're welcome^^kaitlin_mckitrick on August 4, 2008, 10:21:37 AM
Wow! Really good story! FAVS!icestorm on August 4, 2008, 10:32:13 AM
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Thank you!! =DDmiknart on August 3, 2008, 3:37:44 AM
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;___; poor Clawpelt o____o >_< BAD BLAZECLAW err BLAZESTAR XDicestorm on August 3, 2008, 3:38:51 AM
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ya! Blazestar is MEAN!!!Falconlobo on August 1, 2008, 9:34:40 AM
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blazwclaw blazestar?^^icestorm on August 1, 2008, 11:16:03 AM
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Blazeclaw becomes BlazestarFalconlobo on August 1, 2008, 11:36:06 AM
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oh^^darkyoshi555 on August 1, 2008, 8:43:04 AM
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o noes! he's leaving!cool story
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yup! Thanks! =DDicestorm on August 1, 2008, 7:19:50 AM
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The Characters are on my BLOG on my profile. So if you want go read them.icestorm on August 1, 2008, 3:16:26 AM
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shadowpiplup on August 1, 2008, 7:00:40 AM
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can you read my story? it's named "The big fantasey war"icestorm on August 1, 2008, 7:17:51 AM
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sure