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Sad, Sorrow, Shy, Suffer, and the Sea

a poem I thought of this while listening to Rose from TITANIC.  



Chapter 1 - Sad
Submitted: May 25, 2007 • Updated: May 25, 2007
Word count: 245 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 203


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FallenAngel0792 on May 31, 2007, 10:43:08 AM

FallenAngel0792 on (Chapter: 1)
FallenAngel0792Nice, I like the line, "Betrayal and maybe a liking to revenge in tears of Anger." And the metaphore is quite creative; humanity to the sea. Very nice.