Chapter 1 - my heart

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Love?

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kittycat256

Submitted
March 11, 2008
Updated
February 12, 2009
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Complete

Chapters: 5
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Words: 308
Comments: 31
Views: 1,574
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Rating: 3

this is how my heart feels about him

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

Chapter 1 - my heart

Whats this felling in my heart so warm and glad,
I've never felt this way it feels so nice is this what they call love?
My heart so thin and breakbale is so happy when I talk to him it beats like crazy,
Is this what they call love?

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pixiebell on February 18, 2009, 12:31:48 AM

thats very nice ..

mexmyselfxandxIZ on April 4, 2008, 6:19:58 AM

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kittycat256 on April 4, 2008, 10:52:25 AM

thanks

chaos_kitten8 on March 12, 2008, 4:59:18 AM

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kittycat256 on March 12, 2008, 5:37:33 AM

thank u

DragonGirl1136 on March 12, 2008, 4:20:43 AM

D'awwwwwwwww. :3 It's adorable; more like a collection of thoughts than a story. But your grammar still sucks. D: Maybe you could PM me each new chapter so I can correct it? I could be your editor! X3

kittycat256 on March 12, 2008, 5:37:10 AM

ok sure