Chapter 1 - To Be Touched
Submitted June 1, 2004 Updated June 1, 2004 Status Incomplete | Another short poem of mine. I have to give some credit to Pimienimine (sorry if name spelt wrong) I was reading page 122 of Ray and it made me think of this poem Tankies ^^.
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Chapter 1 - To Be Touched
Chapter 1 - To Be Touched
To be touched,
This small sentence can be taken in so many ways,
You can be hugged,
Kissed,
Slapped,
Poke,
The list goes on and on,
But to really be touched,
What does it feel like?,
Heavenly?,
Horrible?,
Is it a pleasure?,
A craving?,
Or something that you’d never want to feel,
What if your so pushed away from the world you think you don’t need it,
Oh………………..,
But you do need it,
You can’t survive in this world without such a thing,
It’s a need,
Not a want,
Once you feel this for the fist time everything imaginary floats away,
Everything not real is gone,
All that’s left is reality and your memory,
So…….how do you know when you get that touch,
……………………,
You’ll know in your heart,
I’ll tell you that now,
But……… you may not no in your mind,
You may not be ready for it either,
All one can say is……,
That no one can predicted the future,
But……you can always,
Count on your heart.
This small sentence can be taken in so many ways,
You can be hugged,
Kissed,
Slapped,
Poke,
The list goes on and on,
But to really be touched,
What does it feel like?,
Heavenly?,
Horrible?,
Is it a pleasure?,
A craving?,
Or something that you’d never want to feel,
What if your so pushed away from the world you think you don’t need it,
Oh………………..,
But you do need it,
You can’t survive in this world without such a thing,
It’s a need,
Not a want,
Once you feel this for the fist time everything imaginary floats away,
Everything not real is gone,
All that’s left is reality and your memory,
So…….how do you know when you get that touch,
……………………,
You’ll know in your heart,
I’ll tell you that now,
But……… you may not no in your mind,
You may not be ready for it either,
All one can say is……,
That no one can predicted the future,
But……you can always,
Count on your heart.
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The_Chao_Lover on June 30, 2004, 6:08:50 AM
This is really good! GO RAAAAY!kuramas_girl on June 1, 2004, 11:54:10 AM
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.......I don't really like it that much. ^^'hieisstrawberry on June 1, 2004, 11:48:02 AM
ooouu now i really like this one! it has a really good point in it and i like how you did it! in me faves