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Chapter 1 - Fallen Angel

A poem of mine I wrote a little while ago. Kinda depressing, but also gives a little hope.

Chapter 1 - Fallen Angel

Chapter 1 - Fallen Angel
The evil of this world penetrates my soul
The darkness envelops my heart
My mind clouded by immorality

Deep in my heart
Where a bright light once shone
Has finally been put out
As I fall into a dark abyss

What happened to me?

The once happy child
Now falls to a watery grave of depression

I can´t fly away...

The white wings I once bore,
Are no longer there
They´ve been torn off
For now I bare ugly black wings
Stained with my blood,
As they emerged from my back
I look at the pathetic feathers
This is what I´ve become...

"I never wanted this", I cry
Then I think back to all I have done
And realize
This is what I asked for
Though the words never passed my lips
I had still somehow asked for it

Everything I had done,
And had been done to me
Was like a knife to my heart

I let myself go,
Let the blood and pain surround me,
Let the darkness surround me...

The a hand plunges towards me
Shining like the sun
It pulls me up,
Out of the murky waters of despair

The one who owns the hand holds me close
I thought no one cared about me
Evidently I was wrong

I look up at him
Tears in my eyes
I see that he bares the white wings of an innocent
I ask him a single question...

"How can you love a fallen angel?"

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sakuralin84 on September 11, 2007, 8:30:55 PM

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sakuralin84you wrote a poem ... *just notice +_+
omg m soooooooo blind.. *reads

it sounded sad but ^^ i like it..
its very touchie somehow
touched by an angel ^^

kurisu_yoi on September 12, 2007, 5:29:58 AM

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kurisu_yoilol that's okay XD I totally forgot I had uploaded it.
Weeee! Thank you so much for the lovely comment =^^=

shinnokarasu on September 4, 2007, 5:07:43 PM

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shinnokarasuHeeeee nice poem!!! Oups haven't seen that earlier!!!! Is the innocent angel Kurama???? lo ^_^

kurisu_yoi on September 5, 2007, 12:38:18 AM

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kurisu_yoihaha very funny. Actually I think I wrote this before I had even heard of Yu Yu Hakusho. But the angel can go right ahead and be Kura :D I won't object lol

Never_Dying_Ice_Neko on November 21, 2006, 5:30:51 AM

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Never_Dying_Ice_Neko*squeals* Awesomeness!!!! x3

KonichiwaHittomi on August 17, 2006, 12:22:14 PM

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KonichiwaHittomiAw... what a freakishly awesome poem!!!

Makoto_1314 on September 25, 2005, 8:46:14 AM

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Makoto_1314i like this poem its really cool

>high fives<