Chapter 0 - The begging of the end
Submitted June 7, 2007 Updated June 7, 2007 Status Complete | Well this is ma story about three kids go into the portal and back in time to when King Henry 8th was on the throne and soon before they know it there in big trouble
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Chapter 0 - The begging of the end
Chapter 0 - The begging of the end
This is the tale of the end of the world everyone belevived that the world was flat until a few hundred years ago but no one ever knew that there was a unknow portal which could lead the person who went into it anywhere in time they wanted to go, evan into the future or the past, but there was one problem about this was once you went into there was noway to get back to the time you came from therefore being trapped in space and time for ever.
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power9x on June 7, 2007, 7:15:55 AM
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Cons: Too Fast, Needs More Detail
Diagnosis: Read a bit more fanfiction before you write the rest. May I suggest my own? Also, as a tip, don't talk in the broken stuff we all use on the internet in a story. No offense, but you need work.