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The dark end to the world

Well this is ma story about three kids go into the portal and back in time to when King Henry 8th was on the throne and soon before they know it there in big trouble

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Chapter 0 - The begging of the end
Submitted: June 7, 2007 • Updated: June 7, 2007
Word count: 94 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 127

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power9x on June 7, 2007, 7:15:55 AM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xPros: Great Concept

Cons: Too Fast, Needs More Detail

Diagnosis: Read a bit more fanfiction before you write the rest. May I suggest my own? Also, as a tip, don't talk in the broken stuff we all use on the internet in a story. No offense, but you need work.