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Chapter 0 - Revenge

well either this will be a poem or a storey im going to write.... BEGINGING!

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Chapter 0 - Revenge

Chapter 0 - Revenge
"Leaving me on this god for saking planet I don't need anyone, i never did.
All I very wanted to do was run away, well i got my chance to run
to run as far I could from my past. But now my past only a distant dream is
now my own reality. You thought you could save me, well you were wrong. You tortured me by seperating me from all I knew. Now my past is nearing and I'm going to find you. Remeber the last words you told me before I was forced to leave?" said the misterous figure leaning over a body laying on the ground badly beaten as the lighting streaked across sky.
" No" said the man on the ground unable to move because he had no use of his body, not able to move one hand to wipe the rain away from his brused face.

to be contuied!

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horses11 on March 18, 2008, 5:34:35 AM

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maximumrideiggy on March 18, 2008, 6:47:51 AM

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maximumrideiggythanks ^^

Mizzsorelle on March 10, 2008, 4:38:42 AM

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MizzsorelleOh coolio carry on :P

maximumrideiggy on March 10, 2008, 6:26:11 AM

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maximumrideiggym'kay thanks ^^