Chapter 8 - R.I.P. Pa
Submitted November 21, 2009 Updated June 29, 2011 Status Incomplete | This is some dark poetry i have been writing lately hope ya like it ps: if you have any ideas tell me
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Chapter 8 - R.I.P. Pa
Chapter 8 - R.I.P. Pa
My grandfather died a couple months ago, and all i ask for is your feedback.
When you walked in the room,
You saw her
When you married her,
All yyou saw was the lives that were going to be created
You served,
You fought
You loved,
You laughed
At 98, you were really, to let go
And wait for us at a better place
Stoli got put down, I lost a lot of my frieends, and im starting high school...
I miss you Pa, and we're soooo proud of you, no matter what you think
When you walked in the room,
You saw her
When you married her,
All yyou saw was the lives that were going to be created
You served,
You fought
You loved,
You laughed
At 98, you were really, to let go
And wait for us at a better place
Stoli got put down, I lost a lot of my frieends, and im starting high school...
I miss you Pa, and we're soooo proud of you, no matter what you think
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Falconlobo on June 30, 2011, 2:12:32 PM
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aww sorry about your pet tooFalconlobo on June 30, 2011, 2:12:17 PM
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awwww well it was nice but did you mean ready to let go?and one other mistake two y's after all in yyou but otherwise very moving