Chapter 1 - The Smoothest of the Course
Submitted January 23, 2006 Updated January 25, 2006 Status Incomplete | These are some of the poems that I have written. Some of them were supposed to have pictures, but they won't show and I forgot to remove them. ^_^ Hope that some of these will reach someone out there. ^_^
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Chapter 1 - The Smoothest of the Course
Chapter 1 - The Smoothest of the Course
“The Smoothest of the Course”
By Mikita_inugirl
A boat amidst an open sea
Set sail from yonder shore
Abound to seek a destiny
And yet to discern more
The chosen path, through which abides
The smoothest of the course
A sudden moment, grabs hold
A rough, insidious force
The boat was strained to take the way
No choice, but yet to go
The point at which would be, to say
The roughest way to trough
The torpor of the ungrasped wheel
As the ship had lost control
The captain then acquired strength
To set back to the goal
The rocky path endured, discerned
Was never sailed again
To remain among the chosen path
Was the captain's eternal plan
A trek explored, a lesson learned
An unwanted remorse
For being lured into temptation
By the rough, insidious force
The symbolizing moral is:
The sea is life, in short
So remain among the chosen path
The smoothest of the course
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Liedetector16 on January 23, 2006, 8:36:59 PM
it's so very beautiful M_I! I just love the way it flows and the theme and everything!!!mikita_inugirl on January 23, 2006, 5:33:16 AM
Well, you can't see the pretty picture I had with it, but it's okay I guess. ^_^