Chapter 1 - just in case
Submitted June 30, 2007 Updated June 30, 2007 Status Complete | this is a pome for daisy my gf
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Chapter 1 - just in case
Chapter 1 - just in case
By: colin brosnan
To: daisy
Just in case you did not know
I am in pain for I love you so
You seem so far, I want you near
My heart longs to have you here.
Give me strength, give me love
Let us fit like hand to glove
Let us share all our days
Showing our love in different ways.
Touch your lip, do not speak
Lay a kiss upon my cheek
Let our souls become as one
Until another day’s began.
Never utter a slow goodbye
My heart to ache, a tear to cry
A chance of love to destroy my soul
I play the part, I will take the toll.
Pry my heart, rip the seal
Unable to hide the things I feel
I wrote this poem just for you
To tell you that my love is true.
To: daisy
Just in case you did not know
I am in pain for I love you so
You seem so far, I want you near
My heart longs to have you here.
Give me strength, give me love
Let us fit like hand to glove
Let us share all our days
Showing our love in different ways.
Touch your lip, do not speak
Lay a kiss upon my cheek
Let our souls become as one
Until another day’s began.
Never utter a slow goodbye
My heart to ache, a tear to cry
A chance of love to destroy my soul
I play the part, I will take the toll.
Pry my heart, rip the seal
Unable to hide the things I feel
I wrote this poem just for you
To tell you that my love is true.
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KrazyPerson on July 23, 2007, 10:34:50 AM
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Aww, it's so nice ^^Hatomi on July 4, 2007, 6:09:06 AM
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omg ! this is sooo cute broo! *hugs*Faves*
WingedSheep on June 30, 2007, 10:30:59 PM
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o_O' what a nice... rhyme :))))
awesome poem ^^ xP
love it!
it's really nice to receive such a beautiful thing...
aww.... i'm really impressed ^^
*faves* :)))))))
flying_Jone on June 30, 2007, 10:13:15 PM
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AWWWW!!! this is soo cuute!! i love it!great job and i can see Daisy got happy :3
*faves*faves*faves*faves*faves*faves* >:D
TheBestDamnThing on June 30, 2007, 6:16:28 AM
awwww colin sooo good your a reall poetDragonGirl1136 on June 30, 2007, 5:55:16 AM
Cute! ^o^moog1895 on June 30, 2007, 5:15:43 AM
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Awww!!Your so sweeeeet! I wish someone would do something like this for me....PrincessWombat on June 30, 2007, 4:43:47 AM
I love this poem so much! And I love you even more! I just can't stop reading it! No one's ever done anything like this for me before, thank you Colin, you really are a wonderful person *Hugs tightly* ^w^You should definatly put more stuff on here too! You're a very talented writter! *Faves(duh)* ^__^