Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted October 23, 2005 Updated October 23, 2005 Status Incomplete | My sister was emotionally abused by her husband. She moved away with him. Then she moved back (without him, they kinda seperated for 2 months). Then she decides that she wants to move back with him, so I wrote this to tell her how I felt.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled
Chapter 1 - Untitled
So many nights I've cried
So many days I've hurt
I gave you all of my love
But still you left...
You've torn my heart to pieces
Wrenched it from my chest
You had my love in the palm of your hand,
And you threw it on the ground.
It is my own stupidity
Thinking you had changed.
It was my stupidity
Waiting, and wanting for you to come home,
But I am done crying for you
The last tear has fallen
I will always love you
But it was your choice
And I don't feel sorry for you.
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Skye_Element on January 2, 2006, 11:18:52 AM
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I like it, it's deep and has good rhythm. so much for no talent! keep up the writing, you are great!supahfreak on December 11, 2005, 5:54:48 AM
supahfreak on
whoa! deep poem! u spond like a prefessional!wow...dead_artist on October 23, 2005, 1:10:46 PM
dead_artist on
yesh i do like poetry and this is cool. i sense strong emotion in it. it makes me slightly saddened..