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Chapter 4 - still no idea

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Chapter 4 - still no idea

Chapter 4 - still no idea
The war part4

Erica disapiared in the trees. Odd tried to go after her, but its was to late, not a trace of her. The gang gazed at the Dragon, with Xana on its back. It was incredible, Xana, was there, in the flesh, materialized 100%. Then the army went forwards, closing in for the attack. Odd ran down the hill charging at them, followed by the others. Odd thought in his head 'Where did Erica go? Why did she leave us on the beginning battle?'


"Odd!" Ulrich screamed
"What?"
"Good luck pal, you'll need it."
"You too."
Ulrich drew his kantana, Yumi flicked open her fan, Jeremie tossed Aelita a sword, and Odd shead a tear, thinking of Erica and how she just vanished. The army approched and it began. Metal flew, blood was spillt, and bones were crushed. after hours it still contiued. Odd was heartbroken, wounded, and about to get attacked by the last raptor of the three there were. The raptor exposed its gigantic flesh tearing killer teeth. Odd was pinned to the ground and was helpless, the raptor's head cocked down his chest, slowly moving with its mouth closed. It stopped and exposed the gagged teeth once again a few inches from Odds head


"Erica... why did you leave me?" Odd shead a tear again."I love you... goodbye."


Just as he said that a wolf ran from the side of the raptor and ponced it, The wolf ripped the raptor to a bloody mess. Then it turned to Odd, its eyes twinkling in the moonlight.Odd sat up and said


"You saved me...thanks"


The wolf nodded somehow then ran off, Odd gazing and relising how buitiful it was. He stood up and began to fight again, wondering why the wolf had saved him and why it looked so familiar. The war went on, Aelita loved the sensation of fighting, Jeremie stayed with her no matter what, Ulrich and Yumi were spilt up. Odd relised the dragon had no one on its back anymore, it was flying solo, and Odd knew that Xana had sent it out without him to kick some @$$. Throughout the war Odd saw the wolf from then on. He tried to get it a few times, but it just ran off. He saw a wolf, but not Erica, he started to get worried about her, if she got hurt somewhere where the dont know where she is, or possiblly, no....impossible....Odd kne she is too strong to do that... He knew she could never do that to him. Just at that time the imposible creature came over the hill...












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CanonKeepers on January 15, 2006, 2:09:45 AM

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CanonKeepersTermina: Okay, lemme throw this at you straight. Erica is a Mary-Sue. A BAD one. Not as bad as Frost or Mithril, but still bad.
I would invest in a spellchecker, too...but that`s beside the point. She will be on the reciveing end of a CK`ing.

Liquid_Mix on August 19, 2005, 2:56:18 AM

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Liquid_MixHey,
Great story.
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